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Post by *.HarleQuin.* »

sam ill deffo leave feedback when i have more time
but u need to back up off DJ becus umm well i have a crush on him he just doesnt know it yet = )
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second drop is definitely better this one didnt flow n structure was worse than mine used to be lol wasnt really feelin it but keep at it you showed alot of improvement from this drop to second drop
not\\TUSSIN//though
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