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Posted: Wed Feb 21, 2007 6:12 am
by Irate
Hmm..
Posted: Wed Feb 21, 2007 8:42 am
by drunken jesus
i'll be real, and rate this like you were males (even though that may not be too far from the truth, just kidding ladies...)
it wasn't that great, it was a basic diss with pretty predictable lines, the rhyme scheme and vocab from both was pretty basic but showed potential, the structure wasn't that good either it was all over the place, but for a quick diss from two beginners(i believe i dunno) it wasn't bad, you just need to work on being more complex & creative in the areas i mentioned
Posted: Wed Feb 21, 2007 9:11 am
by LadySam
so now rate us as females! haha
Posted: Wed Feb 21, 2007 9:14 am
by drunken jesus
wherever it says basic insert "good", wherever it says good insert "ill"
Posted: Wed Feb 21, 2007 9:26 am
by LadySam
lol ty
Posted: Wed Feb 21, 2007 11:59 am
by Lawgix
lol @ DJ good save for urself lol... not only would 2 sams be on ur case but 3sams... thats a bad mix... u guys did a good job... just keep workin with punches n stuff... ur gettin better at it... keep it up