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Posted: Thu Jan 25, 2007 1:46 pm
by MesaR
i agree with mac haha ova dose thats dick ridin man
Posted: Thu Jan 25, 2007 1:57 pm
by |.R.SON.aLL.|
2-3 ..
Jay Killah`s Way ..
Ova Dose`s Vote Don`t Count ..
Basically Dick Ridin` ..
Posted: Thu Jan 25, 2007 5:29 pm
by Tha Kulprit
Punchlines: ew...jay i suppose
Metaphors : come on ppl
Multis: if u wanna call them multi's jay
Wordplay & Nameplay : u 2 frustrate me, lol
Structure & Flow : <<biggest issue, find a way to get that
Personals : Street Creepa
overall - Jay
this battle was sad, and i feel dumber now having read it, lol, but yo on some real shit, yall needa gain a structure thats readable. everything else will fall into place...good luck in the future keep battling
Posted: Thu Jan 25, 2007 5:34 pm
by fuck haters
naw it was the style that fucked it up for me!
Posted: Thu Jan 25, 2007 5:46 pm
by Tha Kulprit
lol listen young buck, u need any help get at me. i been spittin since i was 10, and when i started i was right where ur at. style n structure is 2 very different things, u needa work on both. u need a lil tip here n there me, and im sure a bunch of other ppl around here wouldnt mind it. all u need is some advice n guidance to help u build a solid structure, and your style is on you...keep workin at it tho...
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Posted: Thu Jan 25, 2007 9:04 pm
by MesaR
LoL no it was ur punches multis structure flow name play word play that fucked it up for u
Posted: Fri Jan 26, 2007 2:38 am
by |.R.SON.aLL.|
2-4 Uppin` ..
More Votes People ..
Posted: Fri Jan 26, 2007 3:02 am
by -TraMaTiK-
idk i really dont..its like listenin ta 50 and Ja bitch at each otha...idk....punches street i guess cuz i only saw sumthin resemble a punch wit da wu tang line...the other kid.............fuck it street one ta me my vote = street
Posted: Fri Jan 26, 2007 3:15 am
by |.R.SON.aLL.|
3-4 .. Uppin` ..
Jay Killah`s Way ..
Posted: Fri Jan 26, 2007 3:20 am
by Haz
DAAATZ DA BIRD CALL
Posted: Fri Jan 26, 2007 10:20 am
by MesaR
i no us kids gotta stick 2gether....but dayum streetcreppa
Won Im My Eyez..It was a real close battle because both verses sucked...uppin
Posted: Fri Jan 26, 2007 11:26 am
by |.R.SON.aLL.|
4-4 .. One More Vote !!!!!!!!!!!
Posted: Fri Jan 26, 2007 3:48 pm
by fuck haters
another loss huh
still dont give a fuck!
Posted: Fri Jan 26, 2007 3:52 pm
by Mac
uppinnnn 4-4
Posted: Fri Jan 26, 2007 6:19 pm
by Lawgix
lmao anybody that would get their roomie to vote for this is pathetic... lmmfao its like gettin ur mom to vote on ur lyrics hahaha thats great