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Invincible
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This was good. However, some lines were just weird for example "dick connected on top".
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Invincible wrote:This was good. However, some lines were just weird for example "dick connected on top".

thanks.....yeah but it "sounds" funny as hell so i jst left it..lol
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lol...and u call me weird
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its cuz u R weird!..lol


thanks to those who left feedback...for those who havent...id appreciate it if u did...ill return the favor
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