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Theres not too much else feed to give, BUT THIS SHIT BANGS!!!

Ayo thanks for the feed guys ... i got another one i'll be leakin here soon...thanks for all the Support..

fisrt verse... lyrics are pretty decent bro presents is decent right on point lyrics a little fuzzy hi tones are a tiny bit loud but who care shit was fiyaa lol

second verse: a little harder to understand but presents is juss as nice lyrics a 9 flow is great love how you road the beat bro keep it up

third verse: a lil more complexted with the lyrics i like that the flow is on point

there really isn't much i can say bad about this song shits dope bro you guys need to juss keep up on your game


9/10

thnx @ Blindeye ...and no worries bruh thos tiny little tweaks you spoke of are what i do need to look for to help make this better..CONSTRUCTIVE CRITIQUE is Always welcome by me...
@ ANTI yes this mixxtape will be done by february..So i will holla with the link cuz none of these leaked tracks are mastered..1

LET SOMEONE ELSE BUMP YOUR SHIT... LOSER.

WATCH YOUR DUMBASS SAY NOOOO SIR... I'm RESPONDING... FOR THE SECOND TIME. WITH THE SAME POST.... TO BUMP

LMFAO

PAH...THET...ICK!!!!


HERE....


BUMP!!!!

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hahaha...well thanks alot cuz thats the closest thing i got for feed from you in like months..so i guess your on ya job..

*sings the song by War* Why can't we be friends?

You some Bad Boys ... ha ha

Mr. Tru had some really poppy schemes on this .. the doubling was well done; you're good at matching your voice which means you've got a clear idea of what you wanna do. You're voice has a radio appeal and the vibe is perfect for the instrumental. The spot "I ain't concerned with it ... it's all hoopla ... (couldn't catch the punch)" but it was catchy.

I feel like Petrafyne is trying to record the same way ... with the double vocals but imo his voice isn't conducive for it, and he's not matching up with each take as well. Is that you again right afterward with the solo channel. If so ... I'm likin' that better.

Good Stuff: Tight production, no awkward spots, I like how you guys stayed on the topic and each took a shot at the "hook." It's poppy.

Last verse is strizaight.

Other: Hooks ehhh. The content doesn't come off believable, (Petra = Ferrari) .... For real? ;| .... I guess what I'm saying is - Your concept has been beat into the middle of the earth. You guys are up against some tough competition when it comes to talkin' money, blowjobs, killin' n' cars. It's gonna be hard to set yourselves apart.

I got love for ya'll though