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I like the tone you took with this topic. You mixed that with a nice flow and made it enjoyable to read.

Skylink i trust ya man....
this shit was tight and it has a deep feeling inside..
i dig man.......... keep @ it

Thanks for the feed man... appreciate it

deep shit man, great multi's through the entire peice keep it up man

I think that the compliments are pretty much self explanatory, some great vocab scattered about this piece, and a few nice schemes. However, the flow in some parts just hit me as choppy because of how lengthy some lines were. I dunno how you'd spit it, but some parts just read long, if that makes any sense to you? Anyway, the topic is a bit played out, but you did your thing on it and no one can fault you for that. Pretty nice drop overall. Stay up.

thnx 4 dat yall

Nice drop. And i would quote the same things Arv and TOYH did!! Those would be mah favorite lines too.


Nice drop man

Im not one for long comments... Good views on government and religion...flowed pretty well too. Pretty dope drop.

This was alright man it's a topic that's done a lot so unless there's some originality to it, it will bore me to death. This kept my interest though. Your 1st bar helped that, I thought it hit as hard as an opening bar should. Flow and rhymes were cool I liked the random switches on the inners etc they helped keep things fresh in my opinion. Some lines were a bit bland but the perspective on some was unique and interesting. Best examples of that would be the opening bar and the 2 Arv quoted above. Good shit keep droppin.