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OMG!!! this left me speechless, it was great one of the best things i have ever read wow!!! i almost broke down in tears....great job

Still the realest shit ive ever read on this site

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Really Really deep from the beging to the end really enjoyable.
Props

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WsICCWQo ... ure=relmfu

^ I spit this verse to this beat, and I had to double time my flow at a couple points to make it work, but it flows really well and the content is crazy emotional dude. I don't know what kind of feed you were expecting cause I'm sure you knew this was good, but I appreciate your talent. Keep it up.

DOOOOOPPPPEEE THANKS evo for linking this up

i have been enlightend lol

nah foreals though good read .. great read, took a lot of character to write this .. a lot of heart

Definitely feelin this. Good imagery and portrayal of emotion. Enjoyed the wording, multies and rhyme schemes you chose, although some were iffy in the rhyme department, but not so much that it hurt the piece. Def got some talent, fam. Keep writin.

wow, first off i could see the emotion in this well done, the multies were all solid, you followed the topic well and covered it well, nice metaphors, it flowed very well, over all nice drop, respect.

again... good look on the feed im glad yall liked it... and thanks Alvin I appreciate the recognition from ya... out of all of the pieces I have written this is def my favorite...