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Re: Immortal Platinum *Vs* Pest

Post by pest »

fukk man someone vote who has the credentials.
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Catastropic wrote:i went to ya site on reverbnation, and i heard ya' projects bro, i must say they real damn good...
at ya' age you have a 5star skillz,
and believe you're gonna make in the music biz.
i love ya' sht...most definitely...
keep up the good work bro!
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Re: Immortal Platinum *Vs* Pest

Post by Alvin »

Hmmkay...

Punches: although both came decent/direct punches, pest tied in a better presentation with his wordplay which increased his punch. PEST

Wordplay: I'm going to have to give this to pest, right off the bat with To his ending words. PEST

Nameflips: immortal platinum simply because pest had none. IP.

Flow: Self explanatory, PEST.

Multiple rhymes: I'm gonna say PEST.

At this point it should be clear; MVGT Pest.
I would like to ask, pest, why doesn't your second to last line not make any sense? And IP, why dies it seem you wrote too much?

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Re: Immortal Platinum *Vs* Pest

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Death the subject...
Its titles of shit in written flows...

1-0 me
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Catastropic wrote:i went to ya site on reverbnation, and i heard ya' projects bro, i must say they real damn good...
at ya' age you have a 5star skillz,
and believe you're gonna make in the music biz.
i love ya' sht...most definitely...
keep up the good work bro!
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Re: Immortal Platinum *Vs* Pest

Post by M33Kish »

Ok....

Flow-pest
Multies-pest
Punches-pest
Nameflips-platinum

Mvgt pest, plat come on and spit that hard shit.

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Re: Immortal Platinum *Vs* Pest

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2-0 Upskie
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Catastropic wrote:i went to ya site on reverbnation, and i heard ya' projects bro, i must say they real damn good...
at ya' age you have a 5star skillz,
and believe you're gonna make in the music biz.
i love ya' sht...most definitely...
keep up the good work bro!
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Re: Immortal Platinum *Vs* Pest

Post by Grim »

if you count my vote here it is....this is actually tough for me to judge...I mean pest had better punches and flow for sure...nothing really personal though...it seems like pest's bars could have been used on anyone and pest didn't really use name flips but his punches were still harder...IP had some decent attempts at nameflips but none really stuck out to me and some of your lines seemed forced a little...both had some good stuff but........
MVGT:PEST
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Re: Immortal Platinum *Vs* Pest

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i'll throw out your 'lungs' before you can catch a 'breath'/
fuck a 'paragraph', i'll finish this line to predict i've 'sentenced' death//
weak opener

Homie i'll take your shine, Like im a black hole making the sun crash/
Cuz the only way ya '(w)raps dope', if they was 'written' onna 'Blunt Wraps'//
didn't like the set up, 2nd line is played

Somebody call 'Jack Malone' Ima Murder this Cat 'Without a trace'/
cuz ur bars are 'quick to disappear' like 'cell phones' in 'subways!'//
Liked ya first line. 2nd line was ehh. Concept is played

How could "Death" Your "Your Subject", You needa plead the fifth/
You a "Cannibal Activist"... Doggy... "Eat A Dick"//
Naw man. Weak closer. Coulda came harder

IP

This pest should be Re-enforced,
I can't fiddle with A Hobo that's Poor
*He's A pest like the One's On ELIZABETH TAYLOR'S CORPSE*!!
decent.

*I Told this pest To Backdown Quick*
you think ya big, you a white man in a black Backround Like Ya SIG!!
weak personal

I Told Ya Not to mess With the King
not even PEST CONROL would want a HOLD on this kid
*without Estimating On how much pest spray they must Bring*!!
kinda weak but decent

Peep this kid video, are you on crack? Now he's trying Racial slurs
Cuz now He thinks He's black!!

weak personal

i told ya you was facing Ya TERMINATION, He said
He was a force Greater - Till i reported Him to billy the exterminator!!
weak

My rhymes are the Force that's Major
i fleet this pest like he was hiding under My refrigerator!!
weak closer

Punches - nobody
Personals - Pest
Flow - Pest
Vote - Pest

Pest -
You had decent ideas but you didn't word things right. haven't read any of ya stuff but im sure you could pick it up.

IP -
A lot of ya verse was weak pesonals. No punches but str8 up disses. Like Pest, you had decent ideas but needed to flip 'em better.
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Re: Immortal Platinum *Vs* Pest

Post by pest »

iight thats a 3-0 KO
with a 4-0 Vote...

Thanks IP for that battle, i thought you wouldve had me with ya verse man..
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Catastropic wrote:i went to ya site on reverbnation, and i heard ya' projects bro, i must say they real damn good...
at ya' age you have a 5star skillz,
and believe you're gonna make in the music biz.
i love ya' sht...most definitely...
keep up the good work bro!
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