Circle the Sun

[Dos]

clean shit Tre.. hook is dope, fits the simple feel the beat has for it in that section. singin is actually pretty nice. so props.
movin on..

1st verse is nice.. good emotion an flow, great presence an some dope delivery. theres literally nothing to say bad, except for whats been said about the eq's. uhm, production is dope. 1st verse managed to have a raw feel to it while keeping relaxed enough not to be separated from the beat.

2nd verse, this verse shoulda been 1st imo.. it gets outshined by the 1st.
flows good, but seems like its battling the beat a lil.. presence is kinda mono an the delivery is relaxed, which fits the beat great but when you go from one who has a strong delivery to one thats kinda "ehhhhhhh" then its a hard switch up, it'd be better going from relaxed to more hyped up.
2nd verse has a weird sound to the vocals, like a lisp or something.. it makes it sound weird, duno if its just how the verse was said but it sounds kinda like a lisp thats muffled.

anyways, over-all this is tight. definitely a good joint, ladies will love it and shit. keep at it tre.

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[Mic S]

dope track,
i think you could have polished the hook up a bit more
but the flow on 1st verse was dope.. good delivery - lyrics were cool
2nd guy showed better emotion and his delivery and flow was on point, his lyrics stood out a little more

overall good track, catchy -

[HKX]

4 dis not bein' fully mixed I still enjoyed it as it were mixed dis a sick song homie. I'm feelin' da hook right when it dropped I was like aww yea no lie I repeated dis 3 times. Hooks r very important 2 me & dis is def a killer hook. Instrumental is ill love dat piano, Tre ur verse was sick as always I never hear n e props wit ur verses bro. I felt like I could relate 2 ur verse in many ways & also Petrafyne's as well. Petrafyne not sure if I ever told u but I dig ur raspy voice shit is dope it makes u stand out as well which is a good thing. Sounds grimey fits da theme of every track u & Tre do. I'm patiently waitin' on ur next mixtape 2 drop I already kno it's gonna be a dope 1. Keep pushin' out tracks & also we gotta do more collabos we always come out wit dope music when we do.

[Dynamiq]

some clean ish,glad to see your back tre.

[TreTru]

Ayo al the feed is much appreciated, def listening to ya'lls critique...alot of good advice..

HKX-you know im down..
Mic S-thnx for ya honesty..i'll check da hook again before we master it..
Dynamiq-ayy..when WE gonna colab...haha


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