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Re: SacredVerse vs Orfadox (Topical Battle)
Posted: Mon Feb 14, 2011 7:40 pm
by NoVeL
MVGT to SacredVerse
I just felt he had more of an edge due to the fact it was easier to follow, although Orfadox was pretty descriptive himself. It was pretty close. Dope battle.
Re: SacredVerse vs Orfadox (Topical Battle)
Posted: Mon Feb 14, 2011 9:12 pm
by Orfadox
Fuck It Il Accept That Vote Doesnt Seem To Many Rushing To Vote
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Re: SacredVerse vs Orfadox (Topical Battle)
Posted: Wed Feb 23, 2011 3:13 pm
by Noctoural88
Creativity-tie
Relevance-tie, both on point throughout
Complexity-sacred by a longshot
Flow-sacred slightly, it seemed audio geared
vote- SacredVerse
he just had the more well-rounded and complex verse. props to both
Re: SacredVerse vs Orfadox (Topical Battle)
Posted: Tue Mar 01, 2011 3:31 pm
by FatalX
like the others said both where creative
creativity=even
structure=orfadox
flow=sacred
complexity=orfadox
really I am going to have to give my vote to Sacred....his verse captivated me with the whole first person imagery and emotion....I just see it as a more relatable piece
vote-Sacred
Re: SacredVerse vs Orfadox (Topical Battle)
Posted: Sun Mar 06, 2011 1:35 pm
by SacredVerse
4-3 (?) me, uppin to end this!
Re: SacredVerse vs Orfadox (Topical Battle)
Posted: Thu Mar 10, 2011 12:49 am
by Omnie
Would've liked to break this down, but I'm usually always on here on my phone...anyways...
Creativity: Sacred took this...I still gotta give Orf props cuz creativity is still needed to write a topical, but Orf's was more to the point, where as Sacred is reliving it in a dream
Relevance: Tie
Complexity: Orf...better vocab...wasn't feeling "kicks" and "ice" mentioned in Sacred's verse...some basic lines...
Flow: I think Sacred had more multies, but there were some areas where I couldn't keep the flow going. So I gotta give this cat to Orf. His verse, I read a lil more smoothly...props to both though
Overall: Orf gets the win, but it was a close battle...I really enjoyed reading both pieces
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-- Wed Mar 09, 2011 6:50 am --
Now, close this ish...