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Murk McNasty wrote:Okay, this shit was long, and there were lots of quotables, as well as some bars that I thought missed completely. The surprise came when Deth's set-ups seemed to be a little more on point with his verse, and thats really the only other major difference I noticed. With a battle this long, I would have liked for it to be more personal, and thus harder throughout, but I realize that its not going to happen when both cats dont really know much about each other.

I thought both emcees came correct for the most part, and I dont really have any complaints other than what I previously stated. I think this would be getting alot more attention from the site and voters if it werent so long, especially with this being two rounds. And it could have helped consolidate your punches and created harder verses. But could have, should have, would have, what the fuck ever, right?

Vote, basically for more enjoyable verses throughout, Deth.

Much respect brutha,well thought out vote!

-- Mon Dec 06, 2010 2:28 pm --

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-- Mon Dec 06, 2010 2:40 pm --

Most Interesting Man wrote:I'm not breaking this shit down. Overall, Death had good some lines, his best lines were universal though, so it's hard to count them. He had a few name flips, but nothing really personal. Same with aLb, he had some good lines but nothing was hitting, overall I gotta give my vote to Deth because he had more clever lines, even though they were more stretched than FL's butt cheeks.

My rhymes aren't stretched,lol,they flow well.They're just spit with the seasoned skill of the live spitter that I am.Perhaps you don't pause at the right point in the bars and perhaps you aren't as familiar as I am visavis WHERE THE RHYMES ARE in the bars I write? Merely specualtion,sallgood to me either way or if ti's something totally different than what I've suggested.I do assert,however,that if you read the bars you will clearly hear the rhyme scheme and that the bars aren't stretched.Maybe what happened was THE FORMAT that I used initially was stretched? I missed a few space bar taps,as I was in a hurry when I keyed this up.In that case? Yeah I can see how the FORMAT gives the appearance of stretched bars in say a minimal 3-4 bar stretch of the whole verse.

Regardless,thanx for the ote,brutha.

-- Tue Dec 07, 2010 5:26 am --

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-- Tue Dec 07, 2010 11:54 am --

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-- Wed Dec 08, 2010 11:13 am --

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-- Wed Dec 08, 2010 11:24 am --

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-- Wed Dec 08, 2010 12:10 pm --

DethStryque wrote:

Murk McNasty wrote:Okay, this shit was long, and there were lots of quotables, as well as some bars that I thought missed completely. The surprise came when Deth's set-ups seemed to be a little more on point with his verse, and thats really the only other major difference I noticed. With a battle this long, I would have liked for it to be more personal, and thus harder throughout, but I realize that its not going to happen when both cats dont really know much about each other.

I thought both emcees came correct for the most part, and I dont really have any complaints other than what I previously stated. I think this would be getting alot more attention from the site and voters if it werent so long, especially with this being two rounds. And it could have helped consolidate your punches and created harder verses. But could have, should have, would have, what the fuck ever, right?

Vote, basically for more enjoyable verses throughout, Deth.

Much respect brutha,well thought out vote!

-- Mon Dec 06, 2010 2:28 pm --

uppin

-- Mon Dec 06, 2010 2:40 pm --

Most Interesting Man wrote:I'm not breaking this shit down. Overall, Death had good some lines, his best lines were universal though, so it's hard to count them. He had a few name flips, but nothing really personal. Same with aLb, he had some good lines but nothing was hitting, overall I gotta give my vote to Deth because he had more clever lines, even though they were more stretched than FL's butt cheeks.

My rhymes aren't stretched,lol,they flow well.They're just spit with the seasoned skill of the live spitter that I am.Perhaps you don't pause at the right point in the bars and perhaps you aren't as familiar as I am visavis WHERE THE RHYMES ARE in the bars I write? Merely specualtion,sallgood to me either way or if ti's something totally different than what I've suggested.I do assert,however,that if you read the bars you will clearly hear the rhyme scheme and that the bars aren't stretched.Maybe what happened was THE FORMAT that I used initially was stretched? I missed a few space bar taps,as I was in a hurry when I keyed this up.In that case? Yeah I can see how the FORMAT gives the appearance of stretched bars in say a minimal 3-4 bar stretch of the whole verse.

Regardless,thanx for the ote,brutha.

-- Tue Dec 07, 2010 5:26 am --

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-- Tue Dec 07, 2010 11:54 am --

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-- Wed Dec 08, 2010 12:09 pm --

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DAMN... i don't usually vote on battles... but this was a pretty good one man... i could see who had the upper hand in this one the most... but BOTH of you came with some tight shit... kinda hard to judge it... so i'll do it like Leeroi Green did it... n judge it like that


Flow = aL-b deths was okay just Al had more rhythm
Punches = man... i'ma give punches to Deth... altho Al-B held his own but Deth's just came a lot harder...
Personals = give it to Deth... i liked the way he used Al-B's name in so many ways... haha very creative...
Multies = Deth... Al-B had some good ones but fuck Deth just kept goin n goin man and i like it when people use Multies like that honestly... wish i could do that shit lmao...
Creativity = Give that a Tie cuz i liked the switch ups at the end of Al-Bs verse and then the switch up on Deths verse... can't give that to one person...
Enjoyment = i liked both verses... they were both equally funny and sick...

OVERALL = My Vote Goes To DethStryque... aL-B held his own but Deth just came a bit harder with his verses... good job to both of you and good battle...

So Score Is 4-1 Deth

Keep The Votes Comin...

Uppin...

Flow AL B

EVERYTHING ELSE DETH


4-1 Voting is a tko anyways and this had been going on to long this vote makes it 5-1

Thread closed and records updated.

I actually dug Deth's style. He came nice with the continuous multies. His punches were quick within his multies too, so It kind of reminded me of a Twister song. Well deserving win my man.

Our paths will meet again, I'm sure.

no... reason i didn't close it is cuz its 5-1 TKO... right????