Hip Hop Forum

Yeah dude what the fuck is going on with your tye dye pink font//
It shows your femine side you limp wristed pansy from Vermont//
I'll stop your heart like Daniel Smith cause my name is methadone//
You're prehistoric you still carve rhymes with rocks and stone//
You couldn't just seal up my route you blocked the entire interstate//
Notice how you're not ranked yet? that's becuase you're overweight//
This fag wouldn't choke when I shoved a microphone down his throat//
I've seen him watching gag this slut alone taking post it notes//
How you gonna teach when you're an emcee in training with retardation//
After this beating you're gonna be literally straining with constipation//
I'm like hobo's and pennies, I knock you off track like a derailed train//
This faggot lives in a shit hole like his boyfriend was Suddam Huessin//
Talking about cheese and sex when your last two dates was Kraft//
Call this kid a queer eye with xray vision critizing my drilling shaft//
After all your lines are dirty like Kenny Roger's hand in muck//
Yeah I did lie. I just didn't want to say YOU SUCK!//

Funny that wasnt 4 Bars.

yup not bad koo...ight ppl vote plz n thanx -1-

my vote goes to invincible...i think its clear to see why...his first liek 5 lines were jst better and hit alot harder...i could actually feel the fuck urself feeling in it...LOL...i gave tramatik a lil pointers...if he would follow those he could start winnin all the time..haha...ne ways 1-0

I vote for invincible , tramatik I dont think you're making good punches rapping about guns.

uppin him 2-0 --1--

ight need votes ppl him 2-0 uppin --1--

Invisible. His personals were humorous. He had better punchlines. And a more solid flow. Good effort though Tramatik.

Thats a 3-0 KO

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