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just at work i read thru it quickly n realli like this shit man dope!
ill be bak on later tonite im new to this website luvin it so far keep these rhymes up bro
peace

Thanks For All The Feed

I like this a lot. Excellent Multies from both parties. Thought the flow in the intro faltered just a bit, but nothing major. Nice job on the first verse keeping one rhyme going.

I redefined mind over matter with rhymes and patterns that I combined in this final chapter/
this time I stand higher than the flyest rapper by a little giant ladder and I got my style mastered/

That was especially dope.

A Threat In My Mind And The Shadow That Follows Me Doesnt Fit My Description
Fixed In Position, Clipped Stripped Of Ability And Was Given The Sickness Of Wisdom

Sickest line from Mutual, I thought. Good shit throughout.

thanks for the feed Kau muc precciated

I wish both of my verses would go to another planet and die.

erm that is pretty insightful information there Plex how could we have lived without reading that.

- Mutual - wrote:erm that is pretty insightful information there Plex how could we have lived without reading that.

You're welcome! lol

Both cats murdered this shit, I really wish I could give some more indepth feed but there's too much to quote, the only crit' I can think of is the stretched lines, the multies and content were still dope, although to me it's almost a waste of talent if you can't actually spit it to a beat, although the talent is still present nonetheless, overall ill shit.

Phasewon wrote:Both cats murdered this shit, I really wish I could give some more indepth feed but there's too much to quote, the only crit' I can think of is the stretched lines, the multies and content were still dope, although to me it's almost a waste of talent if you can't actually spit it to a beat, although the talent is still present nonetheless, overall ill shit.

Agreed, but its easy enough to shorten lines if they are separated by rhymes :]