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God damn, this is real nice. The flow and delivery man, real real nice. The lyrics man are some real talk forreal. I was going to leave feed on your rap/rock post, but the player wasn't playing for me. So I went in search of another post of yours. But man this is real good bro, keep doing your thing.

Keep Up.

thanks homie.. yeah i got tracks all around the chamber.. heck me out and keep feeding.. i always feed back..

Thanks fella's... yeah i was concerned about doing a mainstream track and completely change the concept.. but i was like, screw it.. but im glad you all are liking it... Up'n

I havent heard you before so Im not aware if this fast flow is how you normally rap, but it suited the song, and I could understand your lyrics which is important. Like everyone said about the quality of beat and vocal mixing not coming together i noticed that but that would've been hard to do given the beat quality itself. Lyricism was str8 for this concept, good feel and vibe to it. Def. keep it up and look forward to hearing more

Ripped it!, u rode the beat ill playa

Thanks Guys.. Wasn't expecting this track to get as much attention has it has... Check and feed my other post if you havent..

Yo man, Good Shit. I Think You Did A Real Nice Flip From The Original. i'm not So Sure About The Hook Etc, But If You Find That Beat And REdo This Lemme Kno, Cuz I'd Wanna Hear It how You Originally Planned It To Sound. Gotta Real Good Message Here Man, Lyrically It's On Point. Quality Is So-So, Just Try To Blend The Vocals A Little Better. Lyrically, You Did Justice. Nothing To Really Complain About Here That Hasn't Already Been Shown To You. Good Listen Man

Pretty dope song. I don't think the fast flow worked out for you though. You don't have a good enough delivery/quality. Everything was really muffled and jumbled together so it was hard to understand.

That was the only flaw though. Not considering that the flow was very good hahaha, very impressive, I know I'm contradicting myself you just need better quality haha. Loved the lyrics too, very heartfelt. Keep it up man

damn dog this the first time i heard it. pace fast nice drop real talk

I figured a track with this many responses has got to be good and I wasn't disappointed. No major flaws, just the little things that everyone else pointed out. I was really impressed with how clear the lyrics were for such a fast pace. That was on some Dose One shit. Props!

Thanks for the feed, i wasnt expecting this much feed on this track out of all the other tracks i put on here.. but thanks and keep it coming, you all should feed my other tracks even if you dont like it, tell me what you dont like about it.. hit me up.. i will feed back