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Re: Dead And Gone Remix
God damn, this is real nice. The flow and delivery man, real real nice. The lyrics man are some real talk forreal. I was going to leave feed on your rap/rock post, but the player wasn't playing for me. So I went in search of another post of yours. But man this is real good bro, keep doing your thing.
Keep Up.
Keep Up.
Re: Dead And Gone Remix
thanks homie.. yeah i got tracks all around the chamber.. heck me out and keep feeding.. i always feed back..

Philippians 4:13
I can do everything through him who gives me strength.
Psalms 23:4
Even though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death, I will fear no evil, for you are with me; your rod and your staff, they comfort me.
I can do everything through him who gives me strength.
Psalms 23:4
Even though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death, I will fear no evil, for you are with me; your rod and your staff, they comfort me.
Re: Dead And Gone Remix
This is fairly dope i must say, would be abit daunting trying to re do such a famous song like this one, pulled it off i'm impressed good work


..Fuck that gay shit you say on a beat..
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Re: Dead And Gone Remix
Props on your track bruh! Definitely a nice project for you to piece together. Considering you're a Christian rapper, I would assume that it's gotta be tough to find a mainstream song that would have a natural fit to your religious concepts, so the fact that this song exists, it really came together nicely for you. A hard song to follow seeing who the original performing artists are, but none-the-less a soild piece from you. I enjoyed the speedy flow, and things seem to lace decently for you. Quality was good...overall, I'd say I dig it!
9/10
9/10
Re: Dead And Gone Remix
Thanks fella's... yeah i was concerned about doing a mainstream track and completely change the concept.. but i was like, screw it.. but im glad you all are liking it... Up'n

Philippians 4:13
I can do everything through him who gives me strength.
Psalms 23:4
Even though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death, I will fear no evil, for you are with me; your rod and your staff, they comfort me.
I can do everything through him who gives me strength.
Psalms 23:4
Even though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death, I will fear no evil, for you are with me; your rod and your staff, they comfort me.
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Re: Dead And Gone Remix
I havent heard you before so Im not aware if this fast flow is how you normally rap, but it suited the song, and I could understand your lyrics which is important. Like everyone said about the quality of beat and vocal mixing not coming together i noticed that but that would've been hard to do given the beat quality itself. Lyricism was str8 for this concept, good feel and vibe to it. Def. keep it up and look forward to hearing more
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Re: Dead And Gone Remix
Ripped it!, u rode the beat ill playa
Re: Dead And Gone Remix
Thanks Guys.. Wasn't expecting this track to get as much attention has it has... Check and feed my other post if you havent..

Philippians 4:13
I can do everything through him who gives me strength.
Psalms 23:4
Even though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death, I will fear no evil, for you are with me; your rod and your staff, they comfort me.
I can do everything through him who gives me strength.
Psalms 23:4
Even though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death, I will fear no evil, for you are with me; your rod and your staff, they comfort me.
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Re: Dead And Gone Remix
Yo man, Good Shit. I Think You Did A Real Nice Flip From The Original. i'm not So Sure About The Hook Etc, But If You Find That Beat And REdo This Lemme Kno, Cuz I'd Wanna Hear It how You Originally Planned It To Sound. Gotta Real Good Message Here Man, Lyrically It's On Point. Quality Is So-So, Just Try To Blend The Vocals A Little Better. Lyrically, You Did Justice. Nothing To Really Complain About Here That Hasn't Already Been Shown To You. Good Listen Man
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Re: Dead And Gone Remix
Pretty dope song. I don't think the fast flow worked out for you though. You don't have a good enough delivery/quality. Everything was really muffled and jumbled together so it was hard to understand.
That was the only flaw though. Not considering that the flow was very good hahaha, very impressive, I know I'm contradicting myself you just need better quality haha. Loved the lyrics too, very heartfelt. Keep it up man
That was the only flaw though. Not considering that the flow was very good hahaha, very impressive, I know I'm contradicting myself you just need better quality haha. Loved the lyrics too, very heartfelt. Keep it up man
Re: Dead And Gone Remix
damn dog this the first time i heard it. pace fast nice drop real talk
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Re: Dead And Gone Remix
I figured a track with this many responses has got to be good and I wasn't disappointed. No major flaws, just the little things that everyone else pointed out. I was really impressed with how clear the lyrics were for such a fast pace. That was on some Dose One shit. Props!

Re: Dead And Gone Remix
Thanks for the feed, i wasnt expecting this much feed on this track out of all the other tracks i put on here.. but thanks and keep it coming, you all should feed my other tracks even if you dont like it, tell me what you dont like about it.. hit me up.. i will feed back

Philippians 4:13
I can do everything through him who gives me strength.
Psalms 23:4
Even though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death, I will fear no evil, for you are with me; your rod and your staff, they comfort me.
I can do everything through him who gives me strength.
Psalms 23:4
Even though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death, I will fear no evil, for you are with me; your rod and your staff, they comfort me.
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