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Re: Psalms 21:10

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I appease agendas with a frieze of splinters that rime skittish
Sendin’ rhymes in binary with encryptions and fine snippets
Just to align critics who scratch the surface of mainstreams
Wash the girth of the plains clean with verses that maim teams

This was Weaved together pretty Nice ..


No worth in your lame themes follow me in a game of chicken
Kirk Cameron got “left behind” but you still in the same position

I See you ..


One thing that I ain't mentioned, I got the spit of a titan type
It ain’t cocky when you speak softly and carry a stick of dynamite


O!..


You feelin’ enlightened right? But get back in the finals stupid
Take a whiff of the cyanide I tapped out of your spinal fluid


Get um ..


I vision with eyes pellucid, “see” I blew it for new believers
I’ll never get air play… throwin bombs that nuke receivers

Straight ..


My words induce a seizure, records go deeper than wax
Strong armin the guard dogs while groomin’ the weaker cats

Straight ..


Dudes is eager for facts so I might lessen the grammar
These raps will carve a map to leave your legends enamored

Picking it Up again ..


Each epics a hammer, cock it, don’t even look at me wrong
Cause I can dissect the life of wannabe crook in three psalms

Aiight ..


Feel The Closer Could of Been Harder , Lightened Up In Some Spots, Others were Tough As Shit.. First Part was Weaved Nice, but overall The piece was Stitched Together Well, Worth The Read homie.


Stay Up N Keep Droppin
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Re: Psalms 21:10

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I feel ya Amb... didn't want to get all "theologian" on yall... LOL. Tried to simplify it at the end.

thanks for the luv.
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Re: Psalms 21:10

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You've definitely elevated, man. Keep doing yer thing, your lyrical abilities are maturing quite well.
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Re: Psalms 21:10

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Riggz wrote:I appease agendas with a frieze of splinters that rime skittish
Sendin’ rhymes in binary with encryptions and fine snippets
Just to align critics who scratch the surface of mainstreams
Wash the girth of the plains clean with verses that maim teams
No worth in your lame themes follow me in a game of chicken
Kirk Cameron got “left behind” but you still in the same position
One thing that I ain't mentioned, I got the spit of a titan type
It ain’t cocky when you speak softly and carry a stick of dynamite
You feelin’ enlightened right? But get back in the finals stupid
Take a whiff of the cyanide I tapped out of your spinal fluid
I vision with eyes pellucid, “see” I blew it for new believers
I’ll never get air play… throwin bombs that nuke receivers
My words induce a seizure, records go deeper than wax
Strong armin the guard dogs while groomin’ the weaker cats
Dudes is eager for facts so I might lessen the grammar
These raps will carve a map to leave your legends enamored
Each epics a hammer, cock it, don’t even look at me wrong
Cause I can dissect the life of wannabe crook in three psalms

Wow... I can't even quote just one line of that cuz I wouldn't be doing it justice... it takes a lot to truly impress me but you did it w/ that verse.. I can tell you put work into that son... keep droppin that heat... we should battle sometime too if you down.

Peace bruh
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Re: Psalms 21:10

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Ruckus wrote:You've definitely elevated, man. Keep doing yer thing, your lyrical abilities are maturing quite well.
I can die in peace now. LOL!
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Re: Psalms 21:10

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I can't front on these lyrics either...
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Re: Psalms 21:10

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"throwin bombs that nuke receivers"

sweet line!

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Re: Psalms 21:10

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that was straight lyrical homicide..
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Re: Psalms 21:10

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Was 'up!
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Re: Psalms 21:10

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ThaOneYouHate wrote:i Never Left Feed On This?... i Must Find Something To Compare This To...

Oh Yes... Booty And Ball Sack. Because it Stanks.


How Ever... On Different Note... This Was A Decent Drop... Nothin Really Stand Out..


Decent Punches Here And There.. Think Tha Only Thing Stand Out Was Tha Flow..

Nice Drop Though..

I love you too TOYH.. "decent punches" LOL, I hear ya... LOL.
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