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Thanks for the honest vote!! 1-2

Ok...and Why was his vote discarded???

this was a good battle cant vote tho lol

-YungDosia-

Listen, i come with ill spits..this nigga needa chill bitch...
Cuz his names perfect for this battle...it'll be over Real Quix..!!

for an opener this could've been a lot better, 1/5

Check this posers flows, my punches leave um with a broken nose…
Shit He even tried to check in to rehab…..just to get OverDos…!!

this was pretty koo as a self reference, 4/5

Kid u mad whack with that bad rap…Think you ‘Nice’ you’ll get smashed and slapped…
Quix u a bitch…and performing in school’s the only time ur a class act..!!

this was so-so...bit played out universally...2/5

Im getting weeded of purp…he gon’ beat me? That’s just seemin bezerk…
Like the sig…I wont be in his Casual Tees tho…if I needed a shirt..!!

the casualties personal and wordplay was executed nicely, 4/5

Quix you suck! ‘take some pointers’ make sure u heard me clear…
Cuz have u seen his drops?... We need to give Q tips like he got a dirty ear…!!!

this would've been a lot better had it not been played out before, 3/5



-Quix-

I get money, And steal for practice Dog! i’m killing this fag! it’ll Feal Real when his Casket Fallz
Just ’Fold up yah Crew Brah’ or i’m a ’Roll up and shoot yah’ like playing Wheel Chair BasketBall/

i like the the inner multis of the second line, nice pun too for an opener, 5/5

Try harder Dog, Cuz your Best Shits a Problem your Pathetic and yah Text isn't Awesome
Expect Quix tah Drop-em! cuz yah showing ’more Signs of Fall(ing)’ like Deaf Kids In Automn

rhymescheme was decent.. i felt that Fall(ing) was really forced, 2/5

nigguhz round here saying that your Worthless; so quit Playing cuz you Sure is!
mah verse will Penetrate your surface and 'Rip out your organs' like Renovating Churches

nicely done, 4/5

Lil Nikkuh, yah forced shit, Is just Hypeing Me; your too light n weak tah Fight wid me
the type tah Flea! cuz your Text is Trash and that verse was 'Way Less than Crack' like dah Price of Weed

pun wasn't that great but the rhymescheme was koo, 3/5

and look Betta wid yah Style then you are
Your a Lame, a bitch, a faggot a Joke ... I'm a great and i aim tah Melt Posers!
i mean look, yung new he'd be smoked ...so he named himself Dosia

kinda stretched..but decent pun, 3/5


-Yung- 14/25
-Quix- 17/25


+ main categories

Punches: Quix
Creativity: Quix
Flow: Quix


Quix edged this battle out overall, yung was slightly more personal.. u both seem to throw universal punches but quix took it in this case..


Vote: Quix

quix upped his skill on this verse way to go man

first bar was ill on the wheelchair basketball lol
you almost went hard the whole way, lastline was wack though

yungdosia came decent, still hit hard on the played out q tip line imo, just the opener was horrible.. casual tee was dope wordplay just lacking delivery/ set up on it. your punches were less witty in this battle than the others u started here with. dont fall off!!

personals- Yungdosia
punches- quix
flow- quix (stretched still but the inner multis were dope)
wordplay- quix killed it
entertainment- quix

vote - Quix

4-1 tko someone update the battle, good shit guys

haha nothin like a bit of net beef to spice up a battle

Listen, i come with ill spits..this nigga needa chill bitch...
Cuz his names perfect for this battle...it'll be over Real Quix..!!
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this is ok. it lacks the creativity but is a decent personal/namelplay. but in my opinion the opening bar should be a banger but this is just ok

Check this posers flows, my punches leave um with a broken nose…
Shit He even tried to check in to rehab…..just to get OverDos…!!
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again its ok but i would of preferred some kind of reference to your opponent. this bar could be used against anyone

Kid u mad whack with that bad rap…Think you ‘Nice’ you’ll get smashed and slapped…
Quix u a bitch…and performing in school’s the only time ur a class act..!!
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played out universal punchline here

Im getting weeded of purp…he gon’ beat me? That’s just seemin bezerk…
Like the sig…I wont be in his Casual Tees tho…if I needed a shirt..!!
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dope. its your best bar. its not played out in any way but ive used the same Casual Tee punchline before. great minds think alike


Quix you suck! ‘take some pointers’ make sure u heard me clear…
Cuz have u seen his drops?... We need to give Q tips like he got a dirty ear…!!!
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yeah this is probably been used before but you wouldnt know so no points lost here.

overall a decent verse. you had a couple good punchlines and a couple played ones. you had the more personal verse which is definitly a plus point. your punchlines were also brilliantly set up and avoided the usual blah blah multis just to rhyme. i gotta say tho this is your weakest battle verse so far. i checked out your previous battles and you pretty much demolished the opposition but you didnt come as hard here


I get money, And steal for practice Dog! i’m killing this fag! it’ll Feal Real when his Casket Fallz
Just ’Fold up yah Crew Brah’ or i’m a ’Roll up and shoot yah’ like playing Wheel Chair BasketBall/
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dope punch. got the verse off with a bang

Try harder Dog, Cuz your Best Shits a Problem your Pathetic and yah Text isn't Awesome
Expect Quix tah Drop-em! cuz yah showing ’more Signs of Fall(ing)’ like Deaf Kids In Automn
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the sign/deaf kids shit is a kinda played concept but you put your own twist on it

nigguhz round here saying that your Worthless; so quit Playing cuz you Sure is!
mah verse will Penetrate your surface and 'Rip out your organs' like Renovating Churches
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dope punchline. again ive used a similar concept before. somethin like "blast hymn in the organs". still good in my book tho

Lil Nikkuh, yah forced shit, Is just Hypeing Me; your too light n weak tah Fight wid me
the type tah Flea! cuz your Text is Trash and that verse was 'Way Less than Crack' like dah Price of Weed
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nah not feelin this here. generic and not very impressive all round

and look Betta wid yah Style then you are
Your a Lame, a bitch, a faggot a Joke ... I'm a great and i aim tah Melt Posers!
i mean look, yung new he'd be smoked ...so he named himself Dosia (Dosia is another Word for Weed, Maruajana, etc)
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its ok but a bit obvious. a decent attempt at something personal. infact your only attempt

overall a good verse. first 3 bars were dope then it kinda tailed off a bit. the verse was far too generic. i would have liked to see you get more personal


Multies: Quix
Flow: Again Tie (no complaints. Both read smooth from start to finish)
Punches: Quix (had the harder hitting punches)
Wordplay: Tie (thought this cat was dead even)
Nameplay/Personals: Yung Dosia (better and more attempts. Quix was too generic)
Structure: Yung Dosia (Better set ups)

so thats even on cats but ive got to say...
VOTE QUIX (when its so close punchlines has to be the deciding factor in a text battle. overall i thought Quix just shaded it)

anyways good battle. Yung Dosia stick around coz your definitly doing damage. i hate it when people gang up on the new guy haha

Thanks for votin and Quix guess i need a rematch soon fam

good battle