PrecisE vs. FreeFlo (precise)

jusick · Post by **jusick** » Sat Sep 09, 2006 1:00 am

just battle already

MesaR · Post by **MesaR** » Mon Sep 11, 2006 9:30 pm

Thinking your top dog but you're an animal in the petting zoo ill role rings around you//
with Glocks and gages die locked locked in cages coming from rookie status 2 majors//

showing no remorse your rhymes they forced of course I got more to say not ending this shit with a gentle way//
taking this battle with 2 hands then pump lyrically holes though your glands //

Better stay strapped from My Gat that caused skin graphs From this attack//
Hers a critical fact its like a infernal that's spreads quickly enternal combust fair benath the earths crust//

I Hope your ready 2 lyrically crucified ligament tearing inside hope your ready 2 die coz I got 911 on stand by//
Preicse are u still in wonder get that pickle outta ya mouth ever heard of a Cucumber?//

Momeijah · Post by **Momeijah** » Mon Sep 11, 2006 9:34 pm

LoL Nice...Not Much else i Can Say...L0L i'll Vote When PrecisE Drops His..Nice Work Tho

Viral · Post by **Viral** » Tue Sep 12, 2006 12:49 am

FreeFlo wrote:Thinking your top dog but you're an animal in the petting zoo ill role rings around you//
with Glocks and gages die locked locked in cages coming from rookie status 2 majors//

showing no remorse your rhymes they forced of course I got more to say not ending this shit with a gentle way//
taking this battle with 2 hands then pump lyrically holes though your glands //

Better stay strapped from My Gat that caused skin graphs From this attack//
Hers a critical fact its like a infernal that's spreads quickly enternal combust fair benath the earths crust//

I Hope your ready 2 lyrically crucified ligament tearing inside hope your ready 2 die coz I got 911 on stand by//
Preicse are u still in wonder get that pickle outta ya mouth ever heard of a Cucumber?//

well if u really r 12...that was pretty good..i can see some nice lines in dere...some parts were repeated..not sure if it was meant that way...and i also believe some words were spelled wrong....so yeah..other than that it was solid..ill vote wen Precise drops..

MesaR · Post by **MesaR** » Tue Sep 12, 2006 4:06 pm

yer thanks dom and viral by the way i failed english sorry about the typeos

precise · Post by **precise** » Tue Sep 12, 2006 9:23 pm

bend him in 6 places like a contortionist-weak-ho//
not hard to beat a kid whos forcin-his-free-flos//
ill shatter his skull with punches, face morhpin-with-each-blow//
jumpin into rap evelatin in bounds, ill shorten-his-leap-tho//
spittin platinum lines while he sells-meer-gold//
might as well call me micheal jackson, way im takin this 12-year-old//
i supress "free" like a dictatorship, facin me he gets ripped-makin-spits//
quick-change-yer-shit, switch up the whole style or get kicked-mamed-n-slit//

MesaR · Post by **MesaR** » Tue Sep 12, 2006 9:25 pm

Lol mmmmm Nice

Ambiguous Realm · Post by **Ambiguous Realm** » Wed Sep 13, 2006 7:04 am

flow: precise
multis:precise
punchlines:precise
vocab:freeflo
personal:precise
entertainment:precise
similies/metaphors:precise

overall:precise

one sided.. although for a 12 year old.. it was decent.. alot better than when i first started (which was at 13).. n e ways that's 1-0 precise

Conspiracy · Post by **Conspiracy** » Wed Sep 13, 2006 7:16 am

Flow - Precise
Multis - Precise
Punchlines - Precise
Vocab - Freeflo
Personal - Precise
Entertainment - Precise
Similies/metaphors - Precise

2 - 0

precise · Post by **precise** » Wed Sep 13, 2006 9:13 pm

uppin for votes, and congrats on your verse freeflo, your definately gettin better

complexity · Post by **complexity** » Thu Sep 14, 2006 2:43 am

Flow - Precise
Multis - Precise
Punchlines - Precise
Vocab - Precise
Personal - Precise
Metas/Sims- Precise
Wordplay: Precise

3-0

Overall: precise

Cat. Sweep.

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