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Arv vs Chainsaw ( Chainsaw Wins By TKO)

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Re: Arv vs Chainsaw

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same here good shit
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Re: Arv vs Chainsaw

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Ok.

Arv:

My spits is nice, keep ya tongue twisted..give his wrists slits cuz im swift with scythes!!
This bitch is tight?! Nah I'll leave Chain's "links broken" like non-existent sites!!

i Have No Problem With This, Good Punch And Clearly Worded.

Your no challenge, I see this battle as a clear path...its easy to have this queer smacked
Hear facts, its obvious hes been done, cuz arvincible dropped SAW a year back!!

Unnecessary Multis, Another Solid Punch But The Setup Could've Went Smoother.

Its murder he writes..like a surgical knife..the punches leave ya face purple and bright
cuz see you ain't hearda my type, Arv will "FOOD Chain" like the muthefuckin circle of life!!

Oh No Lol, 'Murder He Writes Like a Surgical Knife' is Forced And Doesn't Make Sense. The 2nd Line (While i See Where u Were Going) is Grammatically incorrect And Because Of That Does More Damage To u Than Him. How Can u 'Food' Someone ?

From Tekniq to Chainsaw, theres no change seen, u aint news prick im still too quick..
Only time u go "buck looss" is when ya grabbin poolsticks to use as toothpicks!!

Filler id Say, Punch Wasn't Effective at All.

See i dont usually battle dykes, Chain is back to two channels while im a satellite...
I have it nice, its easy for me to "tire chain" like what tanks use to travel right!!

Nice Ending Punch. in Conclusion id Say Setup And Word ur Punches Better And Stop Throwing in So Many Awkward Multis For No Reason.

Ok Saw:

Arv.. It's Easy-To-Beat-Ya, You're Realsin-A-Beast-That'll BLOODY THIS STUDENT..
Ya UGLY N TOOTHLESS, I "End'n Cease Ar's Life..." Like Bein' BUDDIES WIT BRUTUS!!

Decent Punch, Original idea. But it Was a Little Stretched And Worded Badly. Only Cause u Don't Say 'i Will End And Cease ur Life' To Someone. Aside From That i Was Feeling The Caesar Reference.

"Fuck-A-Mims.." Im Tuckin-Twins ta Bust-Ya-Chin Bitch.. THIS IS WHY IM HOT, B..
Your SHIT IS KINDA SLOPPY.. Lol! Only Time 'A Bombs' Is When He VISITS NAGASAKI!!

1st Line Was Pretty irrelevant. This Was a Risky Punch Cause u Turned Verbs into Nouns So What ur Basically Saying is 'The Only Time Atomic Bombs is When He Visits Nagaski'. u Want Both Meanings Of The Double Entendre To Be Fluent.

Now Ya Lyin-On-Tracks & Whinin'-In-Chat? Yup! Bet You WISH IT WASN'T LIVE..
Cuz You Tryed-Ta-Flex By Cryin-To-Plex... Because You DIDNT MAKE THE FIVE!? Lmao

Lol, Funny And Personal Enough But u Could've Made The 'Didn't Make The Five' Part Wittier, Like Linked it To Something That Doesn't Make a Five Lmao, i Donno.

Fuck that.. ARV'S FICTION.. Couldn't "Act-Tight" If This Rap-Fight STARRED GIBSON..
Illest Vote-On-This-Prick? Not Even Wit MOE-On-Ya-Dick.. Just Ask MARGE SIMPSON!!

Sloppy Setup, Decent Personal And Reference Though.

This Is No Holds-Barred, I Spit Cold-Bars, You Mad Cuz Nobody THINKS YA SAVAGE
I Mold-Scars & My SPEECH'LL DAMAGE Ya Old-Bars & "Roll Ar" Without SPEAKIN SPANISH!!

Crisp Ending, And Original Punch.

My Advice To u is Pretty Much The Same as My Advice To Arv, u Both Have Similar Styles.

This is a Hard One To Call. Both Kinda Had The Same Flaws And The Same Punch Consistency. im Giving My Vote To Saw For Having Less Filler/Forced Lines And More Personals. That Said, Both Of u Need To Work On The Same Shit. irrelevant Multis, Filler Setups And Poorly Worded Punches Can Have The Opposite Effect That u Want in Text Battles.

Vote - Chainsaw.
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Re: Arv vs Chainsaw

Post by -MenaCe- »

4-2 Chainsaw wins by TKO..


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