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Dynamiq:

It's Obvious Dude Can't Afford Grim When I Boost Ether
So 'C-Oughta Stay In His Place' - Before I 'Report Him To The Zoo Keeper!'

Strong Opener, Original Nameplay But The Punch Wasn't Too Offensive, Still Clever Shit.


Top 10 On The Site? 'Not Jew!' - i've Yet To See This 'Pagan' Make It
Judging By the Threads He Post - Cee's Known To Talk Till Ya 'Blue In The Face Like A Skagen Bracelet!'

Cool, But Didn't u Mean 'Till He's Blue in The Face' ?


So It's Odd To Think Cee Could Kill The Stage When On The Mic
Which 'Ghost To Show..You Have No Chance'..Nor 'Displays Of A Poltergeist'

Seemed Like Filler.

Nvm What His Skill Portrays,I Figured Sluggish - Cuz If Cee Were To Build In Place To Linger Punches
Then We'd See A Show Of Hands!.. - And Children Plays With Finger Puppets!

i Was Feeling This, Flow Was Raw And The Punch Was Delivered Smoothly.

Cuz U Bringing Tough Talk Without Akward Muscle Is A Loss Earned Double!
Especially When Ya Past Verses Have So Much Senseless Name Plays - I Thought I Was Battling A Crossword Puzzle!

Strong And Personal, Was Feeling it.

Cruel Words'll Leave This Tyrant Baffled! Cuz Ever Since My Mood Heard This Shy Kid Battle
I Was Hoping He'd Cedar Light - Next To The Cooler Of Diet Snapple!

Man, u Could've Closed Stronger Like Rell Said. it's Like u Just Thought 'Fuck it ill Put This Line in And Wrap it Up'.


Cee4:

Its time to off another fag,
Its a colostomy u had if u got it in the bag!, this Venom`s antidote causin repression
Yeah u off the top with no question, ur hairlines like the economy how its lost in recession!!

Not The Best Opener ive Seen From u But u Came Out Personal Straight Away And Kept The Punches Solid.

So fall back my friend
I ‘finish the prey’ someone call amen, shit lookin bare up stair like its already fall again
Enough mouth for a hall of men, fat lips aint dated Anniston but sure used to collagen!! (call a Jen)

Another Bar Packed With Solid Punches, They're Personal But Nothing Extremely Stingy Yet.

U cant breathe when u pout
Ducked Scott James ur too cheesy to bout, go catch aids since u want the ‘Eazy way out!’
Leavin no doubt, damn Illest found a homo, like David Carradine how ya ‘bound to no show!!‘

1st Line Was Funny, David Carradine Lines Are Already Old in My Eyes Though.

Get out the closet
Camel toe face, pussy breath, I’ll cut out Venom like a sushi chef!,..ur input spoils perfection
This princess gets loyal affection?, watch my punches ‘take out Lady Dy/Di‘ with a royal connection!!

i Liked The Way u Worded Royal Connection, One Of The Best Lines in ur Verse For Sure. Good Mix Of Comedy in The Bar Too.

Coz im…
Assigned to abuser her, u think `Jur ass sick?`…I say `Dyn a sore loser`, out my way im outstanding
U get no play no demanding, plus ya punches in the Hudson how u get away with forced landings!!

Good Wordplay But 'Dinosaur Loser' isn't Really a Used Phrase So it Kinda Fucked Up The Delivery, 2nd Line Was Cool.

Finish him!
49 verses failed against me, they take a strike fall and miss
I know ‘so shall/social Dynamiqs’ and I aint a psyc-hol-o-gist!!

Good Closing Concept (i Really Fuckin Hate The Word 'Concept' These Days it's Like The Most Overused Word in Rap), But it Was Awkwardly Worded And Delivered.

K KiLLaH wrote:Vote Cee4 plus its already 5-2

-Closed n Updated-