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Re: I Been On Feat. Marka (Produced By Vybe Beatz)

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this is a good song but i still dont like it dunno not my style i suppose an menace he is Joel Venom lol
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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Re: I Been On Feat. Marka (Produced By Vybe Beatz)

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Hot track...delivery is hot.....hook is cool

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Re: I Been On Feat. Marka (Produced By Vybe Beatz)

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Delivery was impeccable. I'm going to check out more of your ish!
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Re: I Been On Feat. Marka (Produced By Vybe Beatz)

Post by J-I-R »

Yea this shit bangs homie... Only thing I can say is that i didnt really like how the hook was mixed b/c I couldnt really hear what the dude was sayin the whole time

But your verses were pretty dope and you had good flow and everything and it's def a banger Keep it up homie... and I hope ur doin something with it besides just postin it up here haha
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Re: I Been On Feat. Marka (Produced By Vybe Beatz)

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thanks for the feed and yeah i be doing shows,making beats and selling em, and marketing my own music.

my album is going on itunes december 25th
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Re: I Been On Feat. Marka (Produced By Vybe Beatz)

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aye man u shud put up ya blazin song thats dope
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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