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Petrafyne
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Re: "On The West Side"

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Thanks For The Feed. This Track Is Official On Our Next Mixtape.
No Date Set For The Mixtape, But Expect It In Mid To Late January.
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YungDosia
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Re: "On The West Side"

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quality...is ok...not sure what u usin

vocals are nice but like i said could sound better on the verses.


1st guys verse- ok flow, lyrics were ok aswell kinda elementary. was good for song tho

2nd verse- liked the way u came in and lyrics were pretty good too...

hook- nice chorus!


keep it up guys
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Re: "On The West Side"

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thanks a bunch for the feed Young...the new mixxtape will be droppin by late January early Feb...mos def sum Chronic Music..hahaha...1
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