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Your beef has none to do with me boo boo...
If you thought he would hate you shouldv'e added it in your rules.
The guy who voted for you "DOES" only have 5 post, is that leagal?
You don't cry I won't cry, lets be big girls

2-1 . Final Call.

im gonna vote

Quix WILL hit a Bitch; i'd Be GlaD to SpaR straight StaB yaH HeaRt then Laugh and Fart!
don't get Mad, Get Bars; cuz i'm a Kill Chick ... and have this 'Head seem small' like your AvAtAr
I have tah Carve, and Rudely Write and shoot this ILL BITCH like getting her Movie Rights
your attitude we like, its sweet ... so we'll give you a hand with your L ...we'll call it the Booby Prize!
^^
Those were mad weak dude

and i got Filthy Swag; you ain't 'one tah touch a Clip'
so watch me 'Son a slutty bitch' like PAris Hiltons Dad
^^thats how that line shoulda been structured and it woulda hit like an anvil
nice punch

you got lots of heels, i clutchTons of Gunz; watch me Son this Punk then smoke a Blunt for fun
your too Dumb for Puns, plus dah 'Only flow yah heavy wid' comes only Once a month...Biotch!
^^Punches about periods are played period srry bro

I might Rob her on her Birthday and Take her Cake, Portray the Jakez, cuff her to the BEd and Rape her, Great!
i'll Save a Taste; post it on Illest .... then put dah 'Heat to this Chicken head' like Shake n Bake
this one had me dying but ur structure is tooo wordy never sacrifice flow for multi votes decent punch tho

i'm sick of this BITCH and her Deceptive Lies; I intend tah write how she Pretends tah Ride!
her Text will Die; when she injest my Rhymes ... So Bitch just 'Step a side' like the Electric Slide (WhoooAA)
this wasnt a strong finisher but it wasnt a weak one either decent punch

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He couldv'e got crushed colder for Feb. I 'Tackle ya old act' like 'football players rushed over celebs!!
I bust sober regrets His Illest 'beef history' like spider reproduction, he 'gets fucked over the web'!!
^^This is the start of effective punches with an iffy delivery ya verse are too wordy woman tsk tsk nice punch tho

But I see you still jump tuff, until I leave him wit his 'gums tucked' like he was wearin 'dentures'
That'll teach this dumb fuck not to come bluff, I 'divide & take out ya phrases' like you was 'sharin censors'!!
^^uh oh the monster is attacking

1 Battle got you ripped up for ages, cliped up? You aint 'fuckn holdin magazines' unless ya dick up the pages
This kid suck & rageless!! Quit, duck, or face it, he can't 'give it to em ILL' even if 'Quix was contageous'!!
^^That was a devestating punch because of that hardcore delivery by the multi work ur best delivered punch in this battle by far

came and shot your hopes, thought he was hot, but nope, like doin 'drug plays on stage' give me 'props for dope'
I've seen men here cock ya throat, now you wish to cop the votes, he 'Basic' so this 'square gets boxed & smoked'!!

Quix spits these bars, it resemble art of a retard, 'can't kick it wit tight waste' like 'karate kid pull his chee hard'
Blow out ya brain the remains fly 3 yards, Plan to leave me scared? I 'stop his text ability' like automatioc keygaurd'!!!

Lyrically this fools bland, not creative, complex, lacks meta4's and punches! Why does the categories in ya rules stand???
You'll lose fam, sway votes but its cool man, cuz when it come to wins, he couldn't 'grab seventeen' off a fuckin news stand!!!
^^Way to finish hard with the momentum from ur midbar


Anyways the only reason quix lost is cuz his first four lines were slacked off while illbitch kept firing consistently

Vote:Ill Bitch

Lol at ppl thinking hating on my vote because I have 5 posts..How else do I build up posts? Read all my 5 posts (won't take long) I introduce myself saying I live in the battle arena and that I will be voting on a bunch of battles shortly..I voted on two yesterday, two battles that didn't have many replies at the time, if you want a better explanation I'll give it..But bro I don't know neone on this site I'm 23 years old don't give a fuck who wins or loses but don't come in here and say talk shit about something you have no clue about, it was just an assumption I knew I was going to have to answer to something like that but no biggy, but my vote is legit man so don't hate on it just cause I voted for a different dude than you do, that's what makes an opinion an opinion...Sorry for posting again in your thread fellas like I said tho good battle guys.

Quix WILL hit a Bitch; i'd Be GlaD to SpaR straight StaB yaH HeaRt then Laugh and Fart!
don't get Mad, Get Bars; cuz i'm a Kill Chick ... and have this 'Head seem small' like your AvAtAr

^.. This Was Koo`, it Coulda Used a Better Set Up But it Was a Decent Opener ..

I have tah Carve, and Rudely Write and shoot this ILL BITCH like getting her Movie Rights
your attitude we like, its sweet ... so we'll give you a hand with your L ...we'll call it the Booby Prize!

^.. Lol Had Some Humor, But it Wasn`t Hard Hittin` at all .. Another Koo Bar ..

Rapper? your more like the CUTIE TYPE; Stupid ... a lil Goofy like, and i got Filthy Swag; you ain't 'one tah touch a Clip' so watch me 'Son a slutty bitch' like PAris Hiltons Dad

^.. if U Worded This Better, it Coulda Been a Sick ass Punch .. But How a Father Gon Son a Daughter?.. it Didn`t Connected .. it Coulda Been Nice, That Shit Juss ain`t Make Sense to Me ..

you got lots of heels, i clutchTons of Gunz; watch me Son this Punk then smoke a Blunt for fun
your too Dumb for Puns, plus dah 'Only flow yah heavy wid' comes only Once a month...Biotch!

^.. Nigga ........................... Thas all i`m Sayin` Period Punches On a Female, NO NO & NO!

I might Rob her on her Birthday and Take her Cake, Portray the Jakez, cuff her to the BEd and Rape her, Great!
i'll Save a Taste; post it on Illest .... then put dah 'Heat to this Chicken head' like Shake n Bake

^.. Mah Favorite Bar Out Tha Verse, Nice Multies .. Nice Hard Hit ..

i'm sick of this BITCH and her Deceptive Lies; I intend tah write how she Pretends tah Ride!
her Text will Die; when she injest my Rhymes ... So Bitch just 'Step a side' like the Electric Slide (WhoooAA)


^ .. Ended it Pretty Smooth, Tha Multies Were Pretty Koo` .. Lol it Mos Deffo Had Some Humor, it Was Pretty ill ..




He couldv'e got crushed colder for Feb. I 'Tackle ya old act' like 'football players rushed over celebs!!
I bust sober regrets His Illest 'beef history' like spider reproduction, he 'gets fucked over the web'!!

^.. This Was a Koo` Way to Start Off Tha Verse, it Was a Love Tap to Me Tho ..

But I see you still jump tuff, until I leave him wit his 'gums tucked' like he was wearin 'dentures'
That'll teach this dumb fuck not to come bluff, I 'divide & take out ya phrases' like you was 'sharin censors'!!

^.. Kinda Played, But U Refreshed it, it Was Pretty Nice, First Line Was Pretty Funny Lol ..

1 Battle got you ripped up for ages, cliped up? You aint 'fuckn holdin magazines' unless ya dick up the pages
This kid suck & rageless!! Quit, duck, or face it, he can't 'give it to em ILL' even if 'Quix was contageous'!!

^.. Lol, Whoa! .. Kinda Hit Him There, it Was Koo Though .. Decent Bar ..

I came and shot your hopes, thought he was hot, but nope, like doin 'drug plays on stage' give me 'props for dope'
I've seen men here cock ya throat, now you wish to cop the votes, he 'Basic' so this 'square gets boxed & smoked'!!

^.. i Liked Tha First Line, But U Slacked in Tha Second, Multies Were On Point Tho ..

Quix spits these bars, it resemble art of a retard, 'can't kick it wit tight waste' like 'karate kid pull his chee hard'
Blow out ya brain the remains fly 3 yards, Plan to leave me scared? I 'stop his text ability' like automatioc keygaurd'!!!

^ .. Damn, That Was Kinda Hittin Too Lol, Nice ..


Lyrically this fools bland, not creative, complex, lacks meta4's and punches! Why does the categories in ya rules stand???
You'll lose fam, sway votes but its cool man, cuz when it come to wins, he couldn't 'grab seventeen' off a fuckin news stand!!!

^ .. Nice Personal, i Was Like WTF Until i Looked at His Record .. Ended it Wit a Bang ..


Complex: ill, She Worded Her Shit Better, Seems Like Quix Was Tryna Get Complex, But Unsuccessful Attempt, Cus That Paris Bar ..
Creative: ill, Quix Lost it Wit That Fuckin` Period Bar ..
Flow: Quix, Had a Steady Flow, Multies Ran alot Smoother Than ill`s IMO ..
Punches: ill, She Came Out Swingin`, i Think She Had Tha Upper Hand ..
PErsonal: ill, She Talked About His Record, & How He Was Duckin Her ..
Metaphors: Quix, He Had Better Metas Than ill ..
Enjoyment: ill, Had alot More Solid Bars, But Quix Did aiight ..

Overall: ill, Reasonin Bein, i Feel Like Quix Took Her For a Joke, Like He Underestimated Her .. & She Dropped a Better Verse Than He Did, That Period Bar & Paris Shit is What Fucked Him Tha Most Tho ..

4-1 = Thats a wrap Quix!!

illy .. Don't Make Me Smash Ya Coochie...Lmfao...


Closed & Updated. iLLY 4-1