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[CHAMELEON]

very nice piece, real emotion portrayed throughout, I enjoyed the first verse the most, the structure was seemingly flawless.... I really enjoyed reading this,

We'll grow apart and that's the hardest part to deal with/
It darkens spirits and leaves you with an empty chest/
My son's gonna be walking and I'm gonna miss every step/ - thats my fav part that hits real hard, deep lines


this seems like would make a good audio, looking forward to reading more from you


peace

[The Gonz]

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