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Posted: Wed Jan 28, 2009 5:07 am
by Sordo.
I'm better than you though, thats for sure, lol

get moms to punch you in the face so you dont sound so fucking dead in your tracks

Posted: Wed Jan 28, 2009 5:15 am
by HKX
haha damn think u took da shit I told u da wrong way but fuck it keep talkin all da shit u want nigga think u need 2 calm ur ass down a lil dis ain't da barrio homie u on da net beefin wit a nigga u don't kno than again it jus makes it more fun 4 ur ass I'm all ur doin is makin me laugh

Posted: Wed Jan 28, 2009 5:19 am
by Sordo.
i dont understand these dudes who use nigga like theyre ashamed of what they really are; not black

look, homey, i responded humble to your reply, i even stated that i dont concentrate much on this

but in order for you to push the issue, make sure you dont do some 'shake that ass mami' tracks where you have no delivery whatsoever on and name yourself hardkore x

aint shit hardkore about you, just the fact that youre another name

this is the only thing we can do, and its talk shit, i could care less, here or the 'barrio' like you put it, makes no difference

and its definitely not 'beef', speak on it and move on, or battle me, daddy yankee

Posted: Wed Jan 28, 2009 5:32 am
by HKX
Ashamed of wat nigga of my race dawg if there was a competition on who da better beaner is shit would be me not u wtf u talkin bout son, talkin bout I'm ashamed of my race muthafucker plz been talkin dis way since I was shorty puto how many Latin rappers u listen 2 and they say nigga THINK BOUT... PAUSE..... OH SHIT DID IT HIT U, fuck outta here wit ur racist bullshit kid, better watch u put on here nigga cuz I wasn't talkin shit 2 ur ass and u state dat u better than me u 4 real nigga have u heard ur shit dawg shit is embarrassin dat u even try doin dis talkin bout my name and all callin me Daddy Yankee son u don't kno shit bout me I suggest u fall back and if u wanna battle set it up SPM wannabe. Set it up and stop wastin ur time typin you'll lose in dat battle as well

Posted: Wed Jan 28, 2009 5:40 am
by Sordo.
lol, dude is mad

look at him

remember, homey, you're not black

you can't use 'nigga'

a nigga is black

thats what you are NOT

big ass glasses.. big ass earings.. saying nigga..

lmaoooooooooooo.. what a lame fake ass faggot..


whats gonna happen if i dont watch what i put? you gonna come after me? send some of your fake big ear reggateon listening faggots to me?

hahahha.. dudes just aint got no shame in their game.. it is EMBARASSINGGGGG.

horrible for real

we stick fake tinto loving faggots like you in the pen

Posted: Wed Jan 28, 2009 5:51 am
by HKX
Hahaha homo plz u probably never done time now tell me dis cuz I already kno da answer wit out me askin u a da question if u was in da PEN who was da BITCH u right cuz dats y u all angry tryin 2 battle niggaz depressed cuz u was gettin raped in da pen right I'm I right dawg haha fake ass nigga drop da mic all da shit u tellin me ain't finna bother me dunno y u checkin me out 4 in da 1st place only bitches do dat guess ur a BITCH right lol faggot ass nigga checkin me out and shit now I see how u roll now I see y u so angry and wanna battle me and u roll wit Whore-Fest dats fucked up right there get ur game up son u ain't goin nowhere wit ur shit jus another wannabe emcee tryin 2 be sumthin he's not

Posted: Wed Jan 28, 2009 6:30 am
by Sordo.
sorry, kiddo

ive done time, lol

you know why you dont wanna believe it? cause the worst your soft daddy yankke wanabe ass has done is being grounded

it's okay, little lame

plus I'm in cali, all that raping shit? lol, ya'll can keep it it whatever fucked up gayass state youre in

we're disciplined and politickin

thats why cali got shit on lock, yall other states cant keep shit real, tend to try and be fake wannabe lames like you, lmaoooooo

foooool is mad cause the only black he got is in his ass

Posted: Wed Jan 28, 2009 7:00 am
by HKX
still on dat gay shit haha Cali must be embarrassed by ur ass I got luv 4 Cali I kno niggaz in Cali I've done collabs wit peps in Cali y u tryin 2 make dis a state beef shit ain't nobody give a damn where u 4rm nigga as long as u could spit when it comes 2 dis rap shit dats all dat matters and kid I don't give fuck bout ur life fuck off my nutz puto callin me black haha yo learn how 2 spell 1st of all its POLITICIAN and RAPPING fuckin retard, and we're i'm 4rm Latino's don't get grounded they catch a whoopin kid, wat part of Cali u 4rm I kno niggaz in Salinas and else where dat'll shit on u 4 real lol

Posted: Wed Jan 28, 2009 7:12 am
by Sordo.
wow

kid is lame juice

lmao @ correcting me on spelling

lmaoooooo

c'mon, tinto lover

click the ex, making yourself look like a pathetic fucking faggot

Posted: Wed Jan 28, 2009 7:15 am
by HKX
u sure u wanna battle me kid cuz I could set it up mija

Posted: Wed Jan 28, 2009 9:34 am
by Ambiguous Realm
sounds like ur rushing to make the rhymes fit, was real basic, especially on this beat u could've dropped somethin a lot darker and deeper, avoid words u struggle to pronounce, and when u actually record don't just keep ur first drop unless its actually good u know, it sounded more like a freestyle, u got emotion and that west coast mexican style but ur flow is chopped up in areas

Posted: Wed Jan 28, 2009 10:19 am
by K.O.
hah this dude sounds too much like South Park Mexican. last time i heard his music i was in 6th grade and im tryin to keep it that way. very choppy in alot of areas too much pausing and breathing...take a break from the ding-dongs shorto, you're off beat left and right its like youre dancin wit two left feet on the mic. i was out of town for a few days i come back and some cat is talkin greezy out tha ass to everybody on illest....thats not how you come up on here son i suggest you settle the shit before it blows up in your face. whos sordo? (who cares)

Posted: Wed Jan 28, 2009 1:39 pm
by Sordo.
im better than all of u

fo realllllllll

Posted: Wed Jan 28, 2009 2:55 pm
by Ambiguous Realm
"oh gosh darn it, no way JOSE...i'm BETTER ER than you"


haha...no wonder ur so bad, u can't take negativity and improve.. if u tell a fat ass that they don't look fat.. well guess.. wat.. if they don't get fatter.. they'll still be a fat mother fucker, same goes with rap.. if u think ur that good.. and ur obviously not.. then ur just ignorant and will always suck.. there's a difference from hate feed and constructive criticsm, and im sorry i used words of higher vocabulary...i forget u still gotta educate ur dumbass

Posted: Wed Jan 28, 2009 6:27 pm
by Dead Silence
it was decent
kinda hard to understand you tho

6/10