Posted: Wed Jan 28, 2009 1:37 pm
this is definitely gettin slept on
Personals:cee4
Punches:cee4
Nameplay:scottjames
Wordplay:cee4
Flow/Multis:cee4
Entertainment:cee4
Consistency:cee4
vote:cee4
this was a pretty close battle.. even tho cee4 got the catsweep imo. each category was pretty close.. except for like 1 or 2 but most of them were close..still felt like cee4 outdid it in every area..course this could've been the other way had scottjames gone second, u both do better droppin second(as most people would) n e ways props to both
EDITED- i added the bar for bar breakdown, i also did this with a point system
-scott james-
I'll Kill U Faggot To Prove THERES-A-HOMOCIDE!! Plus I'm "Over Cee/Sea" Like "WHERE-OSAMA-HIDES"!! So Theres No Need To Block~This~Maggot Cuz Quickly Imma CLOCK~This~Faggot When My "Hands Land On 4" Like "MARIJUANA-TIME"!!!!
thought the pun for over sea could've been better, and marijuana time just seemed weak 4/10
I Spit Any WHERE-I-WANNA-RHYME!! Yeah I SWEAR-ILL-SQUASH-YA-LINES!! Peep My Battles, Im WINNIN-ALL-THINGS While This WIMPS-APPALLING Cuz The Only "Chicks Screamin 4/Fore!!!" Is The WOMANS-GOLF-TEAM!!!!
no real set up here, the womans golf team pun was straight 6/10
My SPITS-IS-MAULING!! N Im Whats Poppin, I'm KNOCKIN-THIS-DOUCHE-DOWN, U Soon To Be ROCKIN-A-NOOSE-CLOWN!! I Suggest Ya Best Re~Tire Cuz Cees~Fire?? Yeah Only If U Talkin Bout "Sudden STOPPAGE-IN-SHOOTOUTS"!!!!
i liked the seize fire pun in this, multies were straight 8/10
WATCHIN-THIS-NEWB-POUT!! Ooh WOW!! My TEXT-HOT-MAYNE!! Wanna TEST-SCOTT-JAMES?? U Getcha CHEST-POPPED-LAME!! Cuz We All Know "4's-A-Bad-Mistake"(Forza:Bad Mistake) Like "Writing Bad Reviews For X-BOX-GAMES"!!!!
this was pretty creative with the game reference, other than that line though i didn't like this bar much 5/10
Beat Me? Ya BEST-DROP-FLAMES!! So HERB-JUST-LISTEN To The WORDS-IM-SPITTIN Cuz My Lyrics So Hot Like I BURN-MY-WRITTENS!! This NERD-IS-WINNIN? Pff, I Wont Stop Swingin Till I "See 4's Skin Rip Off" Like "CIRCUMCISIONS"!!!!
this was pretty dope 10/10
Fuckin MURKED-THIS-MISSION!! Then Bust Shots Atcha Dome Till Ya HEAD-IS-MISSIN-DUDE!! Im On An EXPEDITION-TO DISPOSITION-YOU!! Cuz My Punches Knock Ya So Hard I'll "Plant C4 In The Ground" Like A "DEMOLITION-CREW"!!!!
this was pretty nice too 9/10
My PENS-THE-SICKEST-TOOL!! Yeah My TEXT-IS-SO-CRAZY The BEST-IM-AMAZING Lay Ya To REST-LIKE-A-BABY U NEXT-TO-GET-SLAYED-G!! Eh, Cee... You #1?! Well I'll Have U "Goin Down In Tha Ranks" Like "Oral SEX-IN-THE-NAVY"!!!!
the pun was straight, multies were more of a filler tho, weak for an outro 6/10
-cee4-
ALL ON YA MIND, U A 'Herb Market/Mark It' The Way Ya 'STALLIN FOR THYME!', U SUPPOSSDELY SCARY WHEN?
Scott Prefers To Trade BLOWS WITH A FAIRY N, Him N Quix 'Accustomed To Meat Balls' N They BOTH VEGETARIAN!
funny pun, the wordplay was mediocre however 7/10
FLOW SO BARBARIAN When I KILL NECKS SNAPPIN, U 24 N STILL TEXT RAPPIN?, Start LIVIN MAN STAY SMART
U Got A Tech...Noo! Like Not LETTIN A RAVE START, Watch 'Fake Scot Get Kilt' Like Mel GIBSON IN BRAVEHEART!!
funny shit..this was nice overall 10/10
Ma SPITTINS DEPRAVED ART, GOT SICK ANTENNAS That 'Revealin Jame A Son' Like PORN FLICKS WITH JENNA!!
BORN SHIT IM BETTA, FIGHTIN WIT BORED THEMES Coz 'Ma-Scot Plays Sidelines' Like He HYPIN A SPORTS TEAM!!
another weak wordplay with jame a son which didn't do much for the pun, sports team line was nice and the mascot wordplay was a little better 6/10
CEE TYPIN THIS HO`S DREAM..
LAME YA DROWN, I`ll 'Get Down On James Soul' As If His NAME WAS BROWN!!, Lyrical Shots LEAVIN AN EX GAY
Cheatin The Best Way Wit 'Old Lines' EVEN YA TEXT GREY, 2moro A 'Blind Date' Coz U Aint 'SEEIN THE NEXT DAY!!
secondline was funny, first was nice 9/10
ACHIEVIN COMPLEX PLAYS u PUNKS CANT SWARM ME, Ya Crew 'Swayin Dickriders' Call It A 'DRUNKEN ORGY!!'
DUMPIN SHORTLY! It Sucks The MANS CHARM GONE Coz He 'Recycled Mo Lines' Than Fuckin LANCE ARMSTRONG!!
wasn't feelin this that much, armstrong pun was ok.. 5/10
This CUNT ADVANCE? THAT'S WRONG,
Im SMACKIN OFF HUNCHES What Im PACKIN IT CRUNCHES, Your A 'Knucklehead!' Always 'CAPPIN YA PUNCHES!'
Mo Than Match For U Im WARNIN YA SECTION, At 'Ya Wake They'll Stand To Attention' Like A MORNIN ERECTION!!
another nice bar 10/10
MOURNING NO QUESTION U Like Short Haired Bitches 'BEGGIN FOR EXTENSIONS! Girl PREG N NEED ATTENTION?
What A Coincidence. This Lame Had Me DEVEOIUSLY SWERVED A BATTLES JUST FOR FUN, Prolly Coz His Nameplay 'PREVIOUSLY HERD/HEARD' LIKE CATTLE ON THE RUN!!!
bad outro, the wordplay wasn't great, 4/10
-tally up-
scott: 48/70
cee4: 51/70
this is just by overall entertainment..battle was still close but cee4 edged it by a little
i think this is the first time i ever did a bar for bar quick expo lol
vote: cee4
Personals:cee4
Punches:cee4
Nameplay:scottjames
Wordplay:cee4
Flow/Multis:cee4
Entertainment:cee4
Consistency:cee4
vote:cee4
this was a pretty close battle.. even tho cee4 got the catsweep imo. each category was pretty close.. except for like 1 or 2 but most of them were close..still felt like cee4 outdid it in every area..course this could've been the other way had scottjames gone second, u both do better droppin second(as most people would) n e ways props to both
EDITED- i added the bar for bar breakdown, i also did this with a point system
-scott james-
I'll Kill U Faggot To Prove THERES-A-HOMOCIDE!! Plus I'm "Over Cee/Sea" Like "WHERE-OSAMA-HIDES"!! So Theres No Need To Block~This~Maggot Cuz Quickly Imma CLOCK~This~Faggot When My "Hands Land On 4" Like "MARIJUANA-TIME"!!!!
thought the pun for over sea could've been better, and marijuana time just seemed weak 4/10
I Spit Any WHERE-I-WANNA-RHYME!! Yeah I SWEAR-ILL-SQUASH-YA-LINES!! Peep My Battles, Im WINNIN-ALL-THINGS While This WIMPS-APPALLING Cuz The Only "Chicks Screamin 4/Fore!!!" Is The WOMANS-GOLF-TEAM!!!!
no real set up here, the womans golf team pun was straight 6/10
My SPITS-IS-MAULING!! N Im Whats Poppin, I'm KNOCKIN-THIS-DOUCHE-DOWN, U Soon To Be ROCKIN-A-NOOSE-CLOWN!! I Suggest Ya Best Re~Tire Cuz Cees~Fire?? Yeah Only If U Talkin Bout "Sudden STOPPAGE-IN-SHOOTOUTS"!!!!
i liked the seize fire pun in this, multies were straight 8/10
WATCHIN-THIS-NEWB-POUT!! Ooh WOW!! My TEXT-HOT-MAYNE!! Wanna TEST-SCOTT-JAMES?? U Getcha CHEST-POPPED-LAME!! Cuz We All Know "4's-A-Bad-Mistake"(Forza:Bad Mistake) Like "Writing Bad Reviews For X-BOX-GAMES"!!!!
this was pretty creative with the game reference, other than that line though i didn't like this bar much 5/10
Beat Me? Ya BEST-DROP-FLAMES!! So HERB-JUST-LISTEN To The WORDS-IM-SPITTIN Cuz My Lyrics So Hot Like I BURN-MY-WRITTENS!! This NERD-IS-WINNIN? Pff, I Wont Stop Swingin Till I "See 4's Skin Rip Off" Like "CIRCUMCISIONS"!!!!
this was pretty dope 10/10
Fuckin MURKED-THIS-MISSION!! Then Bust Shots Atcha Dome Till Ya HEAD-IS-MISSIN-DUDE!! Im On An EXPEDITION-TO DISPOSITION-YOU!! Cuz My Punches Knock Ya So Hard I'll "Plant C4 In The Ground" Like A "DEMOLITION-CREW"!!!!
this was pretty nice too 9/10
My PENS-THE-SICKEST-TOOL!! Yeah My TEXT-IS-SO-CRAZY The BEST-IM-AMAZING Lay Ya To REST-LIKE-A-BABY U NEXT-TO-GET-SLAYED-G!! Eh, Cee... You #1?! Well I'll Have U "Goin Down In Tha Ranks" Like "Oral SEX-IN-THE-NAVY"!!!!
the pun was straight, multies were more of a filler tho, weak for an outro 6/10
-cee4-
ALL ON YA MIND, U A 'Herb Market/Mark It' The Way Ya 'STALLIN FOR THYME!', U SUPPOSSDELY SCARY WHEN?
Scott Prefers To Trade BLOWS WITH A FAIRY N, Him N Quix 'Accustomed To Meat Balls' N They BOTH VEGETARIAN!
funny pun, the wordplay was mediocre however 7/10
FLOW SO BARBARIAN When I KILL NECKS SNAPPIN, U 24 N STILL TEXT RAPPIN?, Start LIVIN MAN STAY SMART
U Got A Tech...Noo! Like Not LETTIN A RAVE START, Watch 'Fake Scot Get Kilt' Like Mel GIBSON IN BRAVEHEART!!
funny shit..this was nice overall 10/10
Ma SPITTINS DEPRAVED ART, GOT SICK ANTENNAS That 'Revealin Jame A Son' Like PORN FLICKS WITH JENNA!!
BORN SHIT IM BETTA, FIGHTIN WIT BORED THEMES Coz 'Ma-Scot Plays Sidelines' Like He HYPIN A SPORTS TEAM!!
another weak wordplay with jame a son which didn't do much for the pun, sports team line was nice and the mascot wordplay was a little better 6/10
CEE TYPIN THIS HO`S DREAM..
LAME YA DROWN, I`ll 'Get Down On James Soul' As If His NAME WAS BROWN!!, Lyrical Shots LEAVIN AN EX GAY
Cheatin The Best Way Wit 'Old Lines' EVEN YA TEXT GREY, 2moro A 'Blind Date' Coz U Aint 'SEEIN THE NEXT DAY!!
secondline was funny, first was nice 9/10
ACHIEVIN COMPLEX PLAYS u PUNKS CANT SWARM ME, Ya Crew 'Swayin Dickriders' Call It A 'DRUNKEN ORGY!!'
DUMPIN SHORTLY! It Sucks The MANS CHARM GONE Coz He 'Recycled Mo Lines' Than Fuckin LANCE ARMSTRONG!!
wasn't feelin this that much, armstrong pun was ok.. 5/10
This CUNT ADVANCE? THAT'S WRONG,
Im SMACKIN OFF HUNCHES What Im PACKIN IT CRUNCHES, Your A 'Knucklehead!' Always 'CAPPIN YA PUNCHES!'
Mo Than Match For U Im WARNIN YA SECTION, At 'Ya Wake They'll Stand To Attention' Like A MORNIN ERECTION!!
another nice bar 10/10
MOURNING NO QUESTION U Like Short Haired Bitches 'BEGGIN FOR EXTENSIONS! Girl PREG N NEED ATTENTION?
What A Coincidence. This Lame Had Me DEVEOIUSLY SWERVED A BATTLES JUST FOR FUN, Prolly Coz His Nameplay 'PREVIOUSLY HERD/HEARD' LIKE CATTLE ON THE RUN!!!
bad outro, the wordplay wasn't great, 4/10
-tally up-
scott: 48/70
cee4: 51/70
this is just by overall entertainment..battle was still close but cee4 edged it by a little
i think this is the first time i ever did a bar for bar quick expo lol
vote: cee4
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