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Posted: Sat Jan 17, 2009 10:03 pm
by TreTru
yeah man much respect ..right on for the feed..we'll ge on a colab sooner or later..thanks for the feed..Homey
Uppin
Posted: Fri Jan 23, 2009 4:10 am
by 1 !LL B!tch
I figured I would see if you are consistant and you are.
This song was nice to boy, really like your music,good job.
Loved the chorus and the verses were descriptive it was a fun listen
Posted: Fri Jan 23, 2009 7:14 am
by TreTru
ayo...thanks a milli mommy..this one's off of the newer album..
lots more where this came from..just cant put all the tracks up til we release the albumm...respect
Uppin
Posted: Mon Jan 26, 2009 8:25 am
by Lawgix
i really liked this track... i liked the story behind it... both verses... but i think the first verse stood out more... i guess that was urs... newayz man it was pimp dude... we oughta collab sometime dude... get at me... i give this track a 8/10 good shit man both ya'll keep droppin that fire...
Posted: Mon Jan 26, 2009 8:51 am
by TreTru
hell's yeah we'll make it happen..jus not sure when...haha.
right on homey...get@me though...uppin
Posted: Mon Jan 26, 2009 8:59 am
by Lawgix
will do folk...
Posted: Tue Feb 03, 2009 4:57 am
by TreTru
Right on man..peace uppin.
Posted: Sun Feb 22, 2009 11:14 am
by TreTru
-.HaZarD.- wrote:On Some Real Shit,
This is The Nicest song i've Heard posted in The Creation chambers In a While.
The Song was Dope, Liekd What you did With The Hook I got Alot of songs
Written out .. That I Do That With..
You Max B soundin Nigga , ya Flow Was Bananaz
I Mean ya Lyrical Content Wasnt Crazy , But The Shit Came Out Fire.
We Deff Gunna get a Collab goin Soon.
ay yo...whens this shyt gonna happen?
Posted: Fri Feb 27, 2009 10:54 pm
by complexity
Not my favorite type of track. Either way, I can agree with some of the previous commentary, I could see this song being on the radio. The hook and even the sound is catchy enough.
Posted: Sat Mar 07, 2009 9:20 am
by TreTru
ayy thanks complexity..at least i got some feed outta you..
well it is what it is..it's been a minute since this got play's so
let me know what you think..
Posted: Mon Mar 09, 2009 5:46 am
by Problemz
Beatz nice fo sho. Good job on tha beat petra n im likin tha topic. but iight lemme break down my 411....
Hook - Like tha hook alot. Nice job on that. (HAHA 2 whoeva said that max b comment, i can hear how ya got that)
Tre (Verse 1) - Flow was on point, went nice wit tha beat n hook. Lyrics was good too. But every real MC is lookin ta improve, wit that said, i think u shoulda switched up ya flow back n forth a lil thruout tha verse. u shoulda used som mo emotion wen u was sayin certain deep thangs too, so thay stood out a lil mo. Concept is deep tho my dude, good job on layin down a good storytpe ishh that happens in every hood. All in all im still likin this joint, jus a cpl thangs ta try n brush up on in ya upcomin joints. Stll, a nice drop.
Petra (Verse 2) - Lyrically this was real good. Flow was nice n on point, up till bout almost tha end. It kinda sound like u wasnt landin as nice as u was tha majority of ya verse, afta that pause. I think that pause is wat messed u up a lil homie. its barely noticable tho, i had ta peep it 1 mo time ta tell fo sho. But still, u did ya thang homie. u get props from me. This is a nice felt track. but like i said ta Tre, Try use'n a lil mo emotion at certain points wit ya lyrics ya want ta stand out. Also, try throwin a cpl more words in ya lines ta fill it up so u aint gotta pause.
i think 1 of yall shoulda threw anotha verse on this too. Or went bak n forth cuz yall do sound good togetha.
well thats my 411, hope it helps.
Keep droppin yall. I rate this a 7/10
~1Hundo
PROBLEMZ
Re: FIRST RULE..
Posted: Sat Jul 11, 2009 12:29 pm
by Deciple
The flow that you delivered in this track couldnt be more perfected for the type of beat.. if i had to call this track anything it is perfection.. delievery, flow, on point, the hook was addictive and off the hook. 10/10 no doubt.
Re: FIRST RULE..
Posted: Thu Jul 16, 2009 9:59 am
by TreTru
right thanks a milli D..just trying to show a lil diversity here in the chambers..i know some of my drops are a far cry from what these other cats are doing..so thanks for lendin an ear..1