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Posted: Fri Feb 27, 2009 10:38 pm
by complexity
Nice track. When you get your rhyme scheme perfected, you're going to be a complete beast with songs like this.

"it took a HARD-MIN-UTE but now i put my HEART-IN-IT
I speak truths IN-FIN-ITE SPIT-IT-WITH no GIM-MICKS
and for all them HATERS and them CRIT-ICS that dont GET-IT
this song was written to thank my momma thats why i DID-IT"

The substance was real heavy. I still think that my favorite part was the chorus, it was real catchy.

Good job.

Re: Make you Proud.

Posted: Sun Dec 06, 2009 6:30 pm
by TreTru
@Sol..thanks alot B!!..it's been a minute since we saw you round here..

@Plex..Thnx cant believe you dropped me some feed...haha..much appre..homey..1

Keep em comin..

Re: Make you Proud.

Posted: Wed May 11, 2011 9:00 am
by Joe Saint
the flow was dope and so was the first verse.
out of 10 i would say 9.5/10

Re: Make you Proud.

Posted: Sat May 14, 2011 2:49 am
by kennedycurse
the beat caught me right away (i have to get better at beat making) and you've got this chill flow. Very chilled out track. I've listened to it a couple times so it's definitely good. I'll have to read the lyrics soon