Posted: Fri Feb 27, 2009 10:38 pm
Nice track. When you get your rhyme scheme perfected, you're going to be a complete beast with songs like this.
"it took a HARD-MIN-UTE but now i put my HEART-IN-IT
I speak truths IN-FIN-ITE SPIT-IT-WITH no GIM-MICKS
and for all them HATERS and them CRIT-ICS that dont GET-IT
this song was written to thank my momma thats why i DID-IT"
The substance was real heavy. I still think that my favorite part was the chorus, it was real catchy.
Good job.
"it took a HARD-MIN-UTE but now i put my HEART-IN-IT
I speak truths IN-FIN-ITE SPIT-IT-WITH no GIM-MICKS
and for all them HATERS and them CRIT-ICS that dont GET-IT
this song was written to thank my momma thats why i DID-IT"
The substance was real heavy. I still think that my favorite part was the chorus, it was real catchy.
Good job.