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Post by Khan »

i see it this way, F.A.M.E did come hard, he had alot of nice punches, R.SON did good as well, but i think ARV got this one.

he hit harder, better wordplay, nice punches, good muiltz, i really didn't see anything else from F.A.M.E or R.SON yes you both had punches but he came at ya'll on more lyrical level then you two did, for me its the lyricist with the better bars win. so ARV got my vote.

and if you bitch about my vote thats kool cause ill explain more so blow me backwards and swallow my kids..take the damn vote and live with it.

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And I cant afford-to-lose, got ur kids pushin "papa on wheels" how the flow "shorten-dudes" ||
Punches'll more-than-bruise...Mah bars will leave "R." K.O.'d faster than "Randy Orton-moves!!" |

shit had me laughing for 5 mins.


OVERALL:Pretty Nice Battle.
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Post by Haz »

But if U Wanna Bitch Back & Forth Wit a Nigga That Doesn't Stop Arguin

LMAO.
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Post by Dynamiq »

all i have to say is that i read half of this..and i didnt really see that many hard hitting bars..mostly forced wordplay and some witty lines..but they didnt connect well..i advise you guys to work on your overall punches a bit more step them up to connect better and reorganized your wordplay


that is all

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All Audio Battle Record
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Falix (KO)
KraZyLyrical (KO)
Yasii(KO)
Led Poison(KO)
Jay 3rd (KO)
Demo (KO)
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Post by Arvincible »

i was the second half of it...dont advise anyone anything if ur overview isnt even properly done.
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Post by Haz »

Rofl ,
it's Not ' Half of this Literally' Kid,
It's a Phrase.. Sayin Half of This shit isnt even Hard hittin
you fuckin Retarded Chink
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Post by Arvincible »

how many times did i tell u to stop stalking my posts?


well i guess its ok, ive learned to adore my fans.
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Post by Dynamiq »

if you cant take feed man i advise you to elevate..cause forced punches and forced multies are not gonna get you anywhere..

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All Audio Battle Record
8-0-8
Brandon Heat (KO)
Falix (KO)
KraZyLyrical (KO)
Yasii(KO)
Led Poison(KO)
Jay 3rd (KO)
Demo (KO)
Pdubz (KO)
M.Flight (KO)
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Post by Arvincible »

Alright man i guess if ur half read overview brings out the best feed from u then thank you and ill keep that in mind.

But for TGYH, u need stop sucking up to every higher ranked dude...its not funny at all anymore. Maybe thats why ull do well in the military, u cud dick ride ur way up...
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Post by Arvincible »

Thanks TGYH good looks.
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Post by |.R.SON.aLL.| »

.. Juss in Case Niggas Forgot What`s Real ..
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.. it`s S.a.W Bitches ..
.. Niggas ain't Fuckin Wit Tha Team ..

JayGUNNa
RELL FiaSCO

aRViNCiBLE
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Post by Arvincible »

nice

rell got jj's and haz's vote for 1st while i come in 2nd

khan and Magic Mark put me in first and rell in 2nd

FAME obviously didnt get shit, lol but yup looks real to me...
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Post by Arvincible »

this is the most talked about battle, lets see what the new people think about this since fame is now in this site, debate up!
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