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Post by HKX »

whoa damn watch out now niggaz fuck arv u got off I rolled at da Criss Angel line haha fuckin Koms went loco but i thought he could've done more on it cuz arv did more but fuck it lol shit was dope much props Koms said online predators haha pinche puto haha much props niggaz, i like dat poker face line as well haha all ya'll niggaz snapped props
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Post by - Mutual - »

nice drop had a nice flow
sum nice punches from all of ya
i'll give better feed when i'm not busyl8tr
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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Post by ÐÛÇ£» »

this was straight...i've seen better from all of you.. I am in class.. i just wasted 4 and a half minutes reading this..and the disses arent really fun when yall disses me.. cuz yall don't really have any "personals" On me.. besides my
Name".. which is wordplay....

Overall... 7/10..
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Post by Kurse »

Yea can't really deny it...this drop was pretty bananas!
Kinda weird to see Koms droppin an attack along wit S.A.W.
...but hell, on illest anything can happen.
It's nice to see unusual collabs though, even in the text realm.

I think Arv kinda fell back on Impact compared to the offensive that Rell and Ekoms dished out, but where he lacked...he made up for in multi-structure.

Rells:
"But Wait! U Niggas Say Who`s Tha Best? S.A.W, Type to Have U Choose ya Death ..
When They Shots Were Fired This Loser Left, Now it`s Like "Shit Stains On Brides" Who "Duc3 in Dress" ..

^^...had me rollin.

& Ekoms:
"oops dissed hazard..now this fag-is-ticked cuz i dissed-a-queer,
Mark not so magical, cuz his only magic-trick is to disappear"

^^...deserved a mention haha

Koms had the cleanest structure with the most comedic lines though, for that I give him the most props.

Nice shit y'all.
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Post by |.R.SON.aLL.| »

Good Looks Everybody Tha Props ..
Probably Have Seen Better, To Be Honest I Didn't Even Feel Like Droppin a Verse ..
Lol But Arv Ass Was Like Come On & Spit ..
It Was Juss Threw Together ..
Good Looks HKX Kurse Mutual Duc3 Everybody Else For Tha Feed ..
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.. it`s S.a.W Bitches ..
.. Niggas ain't Fuckin Wit Tha Team ..

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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

haha yea arv wouldn't leave me alone about it either so i just keyed it straight to em, appreciate the feed on this, i got no real beef with R.I.P. but arv convinced me it'd be fun and i wont lie.. i enjoy talkin shit in my lyrics haha
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Post by Arvincible »

Lol this relly is just for fun and games...

Thanks for the feed everyone
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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

yea it was fun, i wanna have like a crew battle but i dont wanna join ur gay ass crew to do so haha
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Post by Arvincible »

Uhh thas not what u said on aim.. Don't try to act cool now..
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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

no wat i said was i'd join, till u told me it was SAW n i said fuck no haha, dont lie bitch im cooler than cool, "im ice cold!"
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

shit was bananas yall... i thought it was dope from all angles. dont know the story behind it but for a diss prolly one of the better ones ive seen
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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