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Feed Please

I come-equip, with people that be runnin-shit
and like to loot up spots, just for the fun-of-it
and they just wish that you come down-dog's-way
waitin on your appearance like groundhog day
Sex, money, and murder, shit you've always heard-of
as far as lyrics, I'm the picture painter master worder
I know New Orleans, where people are feelin-fema
in the city that got messed up like Hiroshima
Masta-mass, grabs mics and lyrically blast-yo-ass
I spit truth when most people lack the facts
I respect kayne cause he can sing and rap
but mainstream is weak and he needs to bring it back
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Post by precise »

i liked it man u had some good bars n none of the rhymes were forced

good shit dude
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Post by MicJordan »

When I spit 6 bars, i never fall off like cigars
there aint another motherfucker this hard,
strong enough to crack pavement and split tar
I have no strings attached sex like guitars



bleh i cant keep goin
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Post by precise »

lol^^^ this aint the cypher section dude
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Post by Glamtrash »

It's pretty good. I'd up your vocab but aside from that, it wasn't bad. Good shit kid.
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Post by MicJordan »

nm im retarded, thought it was for us to post 6bars, not him saying his shit was just 6bars.
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Post by precise »

MicJordan wrote:nm im retarded, thought it was for us to post 6bars, not him saying his shit was just 6bars.
no worries dude, but if u feel the need, the cypher section is open for bussiness
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