Welcome to Illest Lyrics forum established in 2005.
----
Free Vapes

Reality Check FT Big Bri

Release your best recorded material and let the world hear your talent. It doesn't matter what level you are on - you will get constructive feedback to increase your skills.

Moderator: Loon E Lou

Forum rules
Embed your soundclick video players with [soundclick]Song Id[/soundclick]. You can also just put [soundclick]Embed Code[/soundclick].

Please go back and fix as many of your old songs as you want.
Post Reply
User avatar
Dead Silence
God's Given Curse
Offline
Posts: 3303
Joined: Mon May 21, 2007 9:34 am
Wins: 6
Losses: 34
Location: Bloomsburg, PA

Reality Check FT Big Bri

Post by Dead Silence »

first track ive done in a couple months

BIG PROPS TO KURSE OF AME FOR THE MIXING AND MASTERING
Faith
Haz
Supreme Lyricist
Offline
Posts: 6800
Joined: Mon Dec 18, 2006 1:41 am
Wins: 67
Losses: 70
Location: The Port

Post by Haz »

lol Stop Tryna Take Waynes Flow it Ain WOrkin 4 U
Whoeva Did Da Hook Was Pretty Decent..
i Liked the Beat...
I Ain Like ya Lyrics Or Delivery On This Homie
i Think U Should Really Listen To Otha People Otha Den Wayne
ya Flow N Whole Rhyme Scheme'll Change.. Keep Droppin Don't Get Discouraged
Work on ya Flow And ya Prescence..
User avatar
Dead Silence
God's Given Curse
Offline
Posts: 3303
Joined: Mon May 21, 2007 9:34 am
Wins: 6
Losses: 34
Location: Bloomsburg, PA

Post by Dead Silence »

LMFAO at waynes flow

i wasnt even tryin

im not lieing at all thats just how i do it

but thanks for the feed.

btw some one sles said the same thing bout me havin a wayne swagger
Faith
Haz
Supreme Lyricist
Offline
Posts: 6800
Joined: Mon Dec 18, 2006 1:41 am
Wins: 67
Losses: 70
Location: The Port

Post by Haz »

Lmfao It's Not a Wayne Swagger Son
it's Wanna be Wayne flow That doesnt Sound right At all
no Hate Kid i'm Tryna Help you
User avatar
HKX
Hard-Kore-X
Offline
Posts: 1132
Joined: Tue Jan 01, 2008 6:34 pm
Wins: 3
Losses: 0
Location: Chi-Town, Cicero/Aurora, ILL STATE
Contact:

Post by HKX »

heard dis shit 2day yo Haz I dunno where u got wayne 4rm but dis nigga sounds nuthin like wayne lol track was decent didnt like how ya'll presented urself on da mic tho maybe if u would've shown more presence on it than I would say sumthin else but u need 2 get on ur mic presence cuz its not there and dats important when layin down a song. I give dis a 4/10 cuz all u really need 2 do is get a better mic, put sum nutz in ur flow cuz it sounded like ya'll was jus goin right thru it even da talkin on ur track was better than da rhyme u spit don't wanna seem like an asshole but its my opinion. Think u should also revise ur rhyme and practice it and find ur style as well cuz than da song well jus sound plain wit no emotion added into it u gotta make us feel da track nigga feel me so yea keep droppin kid
User avatar
Viral
Mentally Unstable
Mentally Unstable
Offline
Posts: 3417
Joined: Sun Jan 15, 2006 2:22 pm
Wins: 5
Losses: 1
Location: Chicago

Post by Viral »

i mixed dat shit....n sent it to u?...wtf did u do wit it?...cuz da version u got up...is da version u sent me dat sounds all echoed n effected out.....dont ask me to fuckin mix shit for u n then not use it....dat big bri is decent....his quality sucks tho..have dude record wit u...or get a new mic...can only do so much wit bad quality...like ur vocals r alot more clear n wat not


but heres my version
User avatar
Dead Silence
God's Given Curse
Offline
Posts: 3303
Joined: Mon May 21, 2007 9:34 am
Wins: 6
Losses: 34
Location: Bloomsburg, PA

Post by Dead Silence »

im sorry viral.

i forgot to put up ur version too.
i was gonna.

but kurse did that version.

imnsorry
Faith
User avatar
Lawgix
The Aphilliated Assasin
Offline
Posts: 4214
Joined: Thu Sep 21, 2006 3:25 pm
Wins: 14
Losses: 8

Post by Lawgix »

both versions were mixed good... just no delivery... or presence... flow was kinda off too... either way tho i liked the lay out of the song... hook was okay... it was decent... but nothing too exciting...
Don't Let The Game Make U, Make Urself

Lawgix

Illest Radio

Image

"Sometimes You Gotta Stand By Your Failures To Recognize Your Success" Joe Budden

pest wrote:You look Easy... Whats Good?
AntiMaTTer wrote:lmao ...is this how you hit on all the chicks?
Post Reply

Return to “The Booth”

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 7 guests