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Post by J-Majikk »

well ive bee gettin request to write a song wit a hook so here it is. so this is my first Official track please listen to the whole thing and leave plenty of comments and critisism and give me tips on how to make my tracks better in every aspect. also hit me if u want 2 remix my shit or do a collabo
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Post by Haz »

Ayooo!!!

IM READY IM READY IM READY

Me And My Niggah Liked The Hook SOn , The Beat Was Tight
Where You Get it From??

Son Raise The Sound Of Ya Voice!.. You Gotta FLow But We Could Barely Hear u
i Could Cus i Was Closer To The Speaker Buuut yoooo.. The Hook Was Nice..

My Dood jus Put More Emphasis In ya Voice... More Pitch Feel Me..
Memerize ya Verses And Jus Gooo Off... Lyk you want Niggahs To Hear The Soul In Ya Voice...

Thats All You Need is Jus To Get Jumpy.. Get HYPED! Ona Track
This MOOOOD Muzik My Niggah, It Ain No Ordinary Shit..

Aight Fam..

Keep It Comin My Dood.. .Rememba Da Emphasis ...
Spit Like You Were Battling Someone On The Block And Don't Want ya Shit To Be Dull So People Like "CRICKET CRICKEt CRICKET"

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Post by Brah-Vo »

Yeh hook was tight.
SO was the beat .
But yeh just speak up, i could barely hear ya flow.
But it was koo.

THis is pretty sick for an early piece
Aka Raiza Sharp, R.A.I
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Post by Kurse »

Nice one Majikk...you definately have a bit of skill for being so new in the game. With the right equipment and about 6 months of steady studio grind...you'd definately put out sum bangaz! Keep it up.

But yea...definately gotta work on the mixing and bring those vocals up!
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Post by HKX »

yo i jus heard dis nigga shit was dope dawg not bad of a track nice 2 be quite honest wit u but yo i agree wit Kurse wit sum better equipment you'll be straight and u jus need 2 learn how 2 get da mixin down don't even worry bout it dawg i didn't kno how 2 fuck wit it at 1st but now im gettin better at mixin shit up keep droppin i see u got sum skillz on yea nigga keep dat shit up and stay on it cuz you'll see them skills evolve over time
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