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Come On (Diss to Demented Mind, 16 Micz, J-ace, Real People)

Post by Kurse »

This lovely little 32 bar track is my dedication to you ignorant, pathetic weak-ass emcees who are doin nuthin but really riding the coat-tails of REAL artists such as myself, Viral, Ekoms, Complex and so-on. I've read those lame-ass (so-called) disses that Demented Mind writes...sorry-ass nigga...lemme show you how a real artist gets down. VOCALS NIGGA! FUCK THA WRITTEN SHIT! Grab a mic and lets see whut you gotta say...hoe-ass nigga. Fuck wit someone from my squad again...I don't mind makin fun of you.

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T T T T TRREEEEATED!!

*end of transmission*
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Post by Subsist »

This was really good , really good flow but punches not too much and it was short for a 4 people diss.
Good thing to know you dont have enough courage to diss me. ;) Its alright I dont blame you. Good one.
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Post by Buddha »

not bad not bad but u could done more wit the beat beat was kinda simple everything eles is aite i agree wit subsist punches was short for 4 ppl
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Post by complexity »

That was some murder, ill leave more feedback later
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Post by 16 Micz »

lol ill probably check it out later...hopefully it'll be worth it..i dont quite know ur reason for dissin me but w.e i don care its internet beef.
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Post by Viral »

LOL!!! i got negative points for somethin i didnt do...good one micz!..lol...
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Post by Street Pharmacist »

hmm flow was good...but other than that lyrics are trash try another 1 buddy
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Post by Kurse »

Never a trashy word. It definate;y has more impact than any of those written disses that you've been tryin to serve...but if you think you can do better (and this goes for everyone, not just Demented)...I suggest you pick up a mic and be about it. ANYBODY can talk a good game, question is; is can you back dat shit up!?

And for those of you who say it's too short for mentioning 4 people...it wasn't meant to be a full-length track! Ummm...notice there is no hook...just a simple 32 bars. 2 Verses worth. Nuthin more...nuthin less. If you ask me...I think it's pretty skillful to pack words against 4 others in such a short track...after all...anybody could do it in a full length track. But like I said...if ur better...show it, don't just yap yap yap about it!
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Post by Viral »

Kurse wrote:Never a trashy word. It definate;y has more impact than any of those written disses that you've been tryin to serve...but if you think you can do better (and this goes for everyone, not just Demented)...I suggest you pick up a mic and be about it. ANYBODY can talk a good game, question is; is can you back dat shit up!?

And for those of you who say it's too short for mentioning 4 people...it wasn't meant to be a full-length track! Ummm...notice there is no hook...just a simple 32 bars. 2 Verses worth. Nuthin more...nuthin less. If you ask me...I think it's pretty skillful to pack words against 4 others in such a short track...after all...anybody could do it in a full length track. But like I said...if ur better...show it, don't just yap yap yap about it!

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Post by Lawgix »

this was some good shit, 4-real, dissin 4 people in 1 setting haha very creative man props
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Post by precise »

lol @ subsists big head, always a comedian.

lovin the track, its dope as hell
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Post by drunken jesus »

pretty dope track homie
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
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Post by Miilz »

To Be Honest ..i'm Feelin Ya Old Tracks More Then Ya New Ones. i Wasn't Lyin Whe n i Said i Wasn't Feelin The Tracks u Dissed Me On. Anyways This Was Nice!!! What is The Name Of This Beat? i Heard His The Other Day And u Won All Ya'lls Beef.
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Post by Kurse »

I have no idea what beat this is...it was a random download I got off of limewire
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