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Post by Brah-Vo »

Hey guys
New track
REALLY REALLY ROUGH copy.
I fell off beat quite a few times, was just experimenting how the lyrics would sound on the beat.
Abit short of breath too coz i was recovering from the flu a week before so.

Tell me what you think, if it's worth fixing up or not.

Leave a link to where u want me to leave feed.
peace.
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Post by Brah-Vo »

and uh, upon further revision.
The lengthening of the word "coz" in the hook is quite annoying. :P
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Post by HKX »

yo dis shit is decent man ur mic is real fucked up tho u need 2 get a new one dawg shit was blarin like a muthfucker overall i give it a 5/10 jus cuz of da quality but its koo man keep droppin them tracks dawg
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Post by HKX »

i jus noticed dat link shit yo i got dis track called YOUNG PUSSY check out it and leave a nigga sum feed peace
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Post by |.R.SON.aLL.| »

I`m Sure If You Woulda Been Equipped This Woulda Been A lot More Than Decent ..
You Gotta Work On ya Breathin, Flow, and Delivery Tho ..
Ya Lyrics is There ..
But Juss Practice & i`m Sure U`ll Get Better Fam ..
Props For Postin it Tho ..
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.. Niggas ain't Fuckin Wit Tha Team ..
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Post by -TraMaTiK- »

better then ur last drop that i remember son.as rell said work on those few things..ALOT. not tryna dis-courage u but u shud do it alottt before u do another track..somethin i shudda done too myself..but anyways keep droppin man i wanna hear improvement!
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Post by Viral »

you need a new mic...lol...u got a straight voice for spittin...just need more emotion and wat not...sounds a bit like jin...but then again im high...so im prolly wrong..haha...but keep workin on ur shit man...if u need mixin help er ne thing...get at me
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