for someone I love

sickest chick in the game · Sat Jul 26, 2008 9:57 am

I just wanna let you know I dont wanna let you go. We gonna go live in the sky together.you are love of my life forever. I would never your sight. Being with for rest of my life was my dream. I cant stop thinking about you all do think about being with you. I choose you because you learn how treat a gurl. I love you to death thats how much I love you. You are the bestest lover i have ever had. Im glad I found someone like you everything I want. I need you in my life.

Im not done
I finish later

- Mutual - · Post by **- Mutual -** » Sat Jul 26, 2008 5:38 pm

well the beginning was aiight but for poetry if u try rap u need to sort out ya layout it will help look at somebody else's layout that will help

May · Post by **May** » Sat Aug 02, 2008 11:58 pm

Sounds great, no critique at all!

i.Eat.Rappers · Post by **i.Eat.Rappers** » Sun Aug 03, 2008 9:50 pm

This was ok, u needa put more effort in the shit u write. but it wasnt bad though.

5 mics · Post by **5 mics** » Tue Aug 05, 2008 6:43 pm

uhhh word

for someone I love

for someone I love

Cool :)

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