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Post by Viral »

soooo i forgot to upload the correct version to Soundclick like i did wit a bunch of other ones....soooo this one shouldnt sound retarded and slow or chopped n screwed like it did before....
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the verse were damm good shit
but i wasnt really feelin the hook it jus wasnt as good
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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Yo I Dunno What The Fuck U U Wus Thinkin Putin Dis Track Togetha..
The Hook Was Not Catchy At All...Didnt Like How you Delivered your Verse
u Sounded Like a Waterd Down E-40...
K.O. had The Worse Verse..Not jus Sayin it Cause i Ran Him off Da Face of Da Earth... HKX was aight.. The Autotune Wus Pretty Gay Though.. Real Talk..
& G Baby Ended it Strait.. All Yall Had Da Same Exact Kinda Voice i Dunno..
This Track Wus Not One of Ur Betta Tracks in My Opinion
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Post by ÐÛÇ£» »

Not one of your better tracks but definately entertaining Lol....Propz.. i think its a pretty descent song...
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Post by Buck »

Lol, nice lil catchy trak wit a real mainstream kinda feel to it. I think tha kat on tha 1st verze came pretty correct, kinda reminded me of an old school Em. Tha 2nd verze waz ok, stayed wit' tha topic pretty well but nutin' really stood out. Tha kat on tha 3rd verze came super simple on tha lyrical tip, and said fuk a lil too much for one verze, but it flow waz pretty nazty, lol. Tha 4th kat waz ok, nice lil endin' but nutin really astonishing, tha hook waz nice and catchy and tha beat and mixin' waz done great az well... get at me and stay up...1
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Post by Viral »

i had 1st n 4th veres....HKX n KO went back n forth on da 3rd verse...im not sure alotta people got dat...thanks for da feed man..good lookin out
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