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!$Chicago$! Comin' ft. Tara

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!$Chicago$! Comin' ft. Tara

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Post by complexity »

You should ask for feedback on a certain drop.

People will be more inclined to leave feedback.
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Ayo Personally i Felt Like Da Girls Voice Suckd..
You Sound Like a Mix Of Shyne & a Nigga From Crime Mob.
Lyrics is Reeeeeal Basic.. Flow is Cool... Beat Wus Strait..

Overrall it Wus a Kool Track..
Like i Said Personally i Think Da Girl Who Singin Sucks..
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Post by Viral »

ima have to agree wit haz on dat girls voice...it was jst a lil booty...lol....ur flow was good...it was wit da beat....ur lyrics r a bit basic...u got some good lines tho in there....one thing dat could be worked on...dat i feel like i tell everyone..cuz well i do..but the mixing of the track...ur vocals n wat not could be blended a bit more...but otherwise besides dat it was pretty straight...if u ever want mixin done on ur vocals...like i offer everyone who drops audio....get at me id be more than willing to help....if u wanna kno how my mixing is...da everyday im...?? is a track i mixed....jockin me......my momma raised me....seperate da real from da fake...r my most recent projects....so get at me if ur interested..
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Post by HKX »

yo I agree wit Viral dawg dis shit is straight but when I heard it a nigga didn't feel dat emotin like damn I could bump dis in my whip lol u need 2 amp it up on recordin nigga put sum more emotion into cuz than it'll sound borin and plain all u really gotta do is put more emotion into it
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