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Just some shit i was feelin its a freestyle so it isnt Grade A but i think yall get my flow
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how about tryin to leave others feed first then and only then may you see some feed your way...
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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~Symbolikull~ wrote:how about tryin to leave others feed first then and only then may you see some feed your way...


Yep.
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Post by Viral »

i dont know y u use a reverb on ur voice man...sounds like shit.....send me ur vocal tracks...ill mix em for u....make it easier to listen.....and...clearer.....otherwise...this was pretty basic....i will say that u actually seem to be able to ride a beat alot better then u ever did before...buuutt...u neeeeed alot o work...
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i didnt use a reverb i just copied the verse and putit underneath it but made it slightly delayed by a few milliseconds and added echos
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Dead Silence wrote:i didnt use a reverb i just copied the verse and putit underneath it but made it slightly delayed by a few milliseconds and added echos
well in that case u woulda gotten a better sound off a reverb than doin that shit....if ur gonna do dubs...re record it...n if its a freestyle like u said..then u shoulda left one vocal track and jst tweaked that one....cuz it woulda sounded a hell of alot better
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ight well could i give u the beat and vocals and u can mix it and shit and tell me what u did with screen shots and shit?
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sure...if u use Cubase...but send it to me ne ways n ill mix it for u
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ight i wont send u my session just my vocals and beat
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Post by Subsist »

youve got the deadly combination. beat , flow and emotion.
good beat. huge emotion. youve got a great flow but you're letting lyrics ruin your flow.
if at anytime you believe a bar ruins your flow you either gotta modify or get rid of it.
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Post by Dead Silence »

ight i see what ur saying

keep doing wwhat imdoing but fix my lyrics right?
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