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this is a track about a two year relationship i was in with a women who was crazyy...
lemme kno what yall think

written and performed by K. Owens

Prod. by JPhat

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word. thanks for the feed yo.
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Post by Brah-Vo »

Shit was nice.
Flow was good
i liked the beat
concept was relatable
All in all a great all round piece.

BETTER THEN VIRAL BAHAHAHAHA.

Nah jokes <3
Aka Raiza Sharp, R.A.I
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Post by complexity »

Good topic to tackle and the lyrics were nice.
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Post by Glamtrash »

This is good. Well constructed, nice flow, good beat. All in all my favourite from you yet. The last verse is my favourite.
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Post by HKX »

track was sick dawg lol females sum is krazy fam lol
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