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WE GET HIGH NEW TRACK UP!!

Post by HKX »

YO CHECK OUT DIS TRACK I RECORDED WAY BACK IN DA DAY CALLED WE GET HIGH. LEAVE SUM FEEDBACK AND ILL DO DA SAME 4 U NIGGAZ, I KNO U NIGGAZ R GONNA LUV DIS ONE ESPECIALLY MY NIGGAZ DAT SMOKE DAT MARY JANE SHIT LOL
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Post by Viral »

ur flow on dis was dope...n da lyrics were tight...i like wat ya did wit it..haha.....me kurse kasper n jilla did a track to dis beat haha...u should check it out.."AME"...i like dis track tho...keep droppin ya tracks man....n..GET AT ME!
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Post by drunken jesus »

cool track, delivery was on point, flow was on point for the most part, their were a few off parts

only real complaints are i hate this beat because its been used to death, & the rhymes were lil too simple & i don't mean their wasn't enough metaphors/similes etc. i'm referring to how you only typically rhymed the last syllable/word of the bars
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]

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Post by UNeeK »

TOp Beat
Lyrics
ANd I reckon Flo.Wus Dope!!!
Like Thiz Trak....
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