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http://soundclick.com/share?songid=6134745

* TOPKLASS PRODUCTIONS ON THE BEAT * sampled the chorus and parts of the acapella from Sisqo's song 'how deep is your love for me'

wud apperciate some hate/feed/whatever comments about it u feel even if ur leavin a MLK speech about how bad it iz loll thanks and ill return the favor
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Post by Glamtrash »

It's not bad, but the chorus sounds rushed and like shit.
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

sound quality is absolute shit, your vocals are way to loud, and the chorus is way to low, beat was kinda wack, lyrics werent anything, your flow. delivery and presence kinda makes me wanna tell you to let ur dream go and usually im the one sayin reach for your goals, but this was the worst excuse for a song ive ever heard, then again the lyrics were absolutely horrible.


you should seriously give it up kid, i mean damn.... my bad but its how i feel dawg
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Post by -TraMaTiK- »

thanks 4 the hate fat ass lol keep it comin
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

thats a good come back, k-fed....lol

too bad no one replyin to ur shit is fat you idiotic no talent useless piece of a bloody tampon rapper
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Post by -TraMaTiK- »

ur retardedness iz insulting my intelligence,u need 2 realize quite a few things,#1 ur in ur20s and still on rap forums thinkin ur somethin nice cuz u can TEXT i dont see u doin what kurse or anybody else does,#2 i JUST posted this no longer then 10mins ago,but i assumed i get some hate from a internet addicted,4eyed peter griffin look a like,like urself
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

peter griffin??? maybe you need to borrow my glasses, and addiction??? sorry partner but its called a hobby, for one... you could never dream of makin the money i make, two... you could never dream of havin the talent of me yet alone some of the others on the site, and three... well there is no three wit you...



wait there is...

big p actually has more audio talent than you
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

matter of fact we can settle this one way and one way only...

audio battle it out


you down
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Post by -TraMaTiK- »

*claps*u done actin like u kno somethin yet?newayz uppin feed
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Post by 16 Micz »

not feelin it fam, lyrics were ok, track wasnt.
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Post by -TraMaTiK- »

~Symbolikull~ wrote:matter of fact we can settle this one way and one way only...

audio battle it out


you down
might as well,wont prove nething except whos 'better' at audio..but idc man,do we pick out seperate beats or use same one or what?
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Post by MesaR »

i agree this track wasnt the best.. you can come alot harder.. but you shouldn't give up.. ghost is hating on everyone.. stay up
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..Fuck that gay shit you say on a beat..
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

no its not hate, he jus took it the wrong way, and ur jus gay
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Post by -TraMaTiK- »

-Sequence thanks for that feed- and ghost yea^ i did it take the wrong way i admit,i was quick'ta jump the gun n shit but i aint gonna give up or whatever and 2 answer ur callout thread..i can freestyle but not that well..u wanna make it regular 2 -3min battle with ne beat u want?
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Post by Cee4 »

eh i gotta be honest i didnt like this. i wouldnt tell u to give up but u gotta improve a lot if your serious about audio. maybe u just do it for fun then theres nuthin wrong with that
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