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Young K · Post by **Young K** » Sat Jul 28, 2007 1:20 pm

i wanna listen to this but its not working for me...

Young K · Post by **Young K** » Sat Jul 28, 2007 1:27 pm

It finally downloaded...

Beat-Great...
Lyrics-Were good but i could hardly understand you but maybe that was just me...
Flow-Was on point...
Overall-this track was pretty great, i love the beat though did you make it???

Prophet · Post by **Prophet** » Sat Jul 28, 2007 3:29 pm

First of all, KG I could hear the lyrics just fine, maybe its your computer. This shit was hot, was that Samuel L. Jackson that was talking at the beginning? I think I heard him say that in Pulp Fiction, anywayz nice way to start a diss track lol. The beat was tight, everything was pretty much on point. Only thing I couldn't hear well was the Mary Poppins line. Other than that, you did a good job.

Young K · Post by **Young K** » Sat Jul 28, 2007 3:58 pm

maybe it is my computer this was still hott though

B-Bear · Post by **B-Bear** » Tue Jul 31, 2007 3:18 am

Delivery was a lil awkward.. sounded like u stuggled to keep the pace up sometimes and other times u were a lil off beat.. but considered this is an amateur recording, it's good..

Flow woulda been better if u'd changed the style up a bit on this piece.. lyrics were straight.. liked the mary poppins line..

And the beat - ILL!

Keep that heat comin!

Street Pharmacist · Post by **Street Pharmacist** » Wed Aug 01, 2007 8:41 am

lol good shit i like the lil pulp fiction act in the begginin,the beat is crazy is too,ur flow and lyrics was on point keep it up holla.

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