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BigP wrote:
Kurse wrote:Mary Jane called me tonite. She said she's changing her name.

I dunno...he might really smoke weed. I mean seriously...you'd have to be high to think this is good. Well...even high I can't guarentee this'll be good...but it probably won't hurt as much!

Andy Milanokis write this?

Seriously...this song wasn't very good. I mean...I'll give it props cuz it's better than the last song you did. But thats all I can really say. Not a very good choice in beat either.
They guy wanted me in his song, so since he wanted me in his song, he gave me the beat and lyrics. so yeah none of it was mine, it was all his.
BULLSHIT..lol..
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WTF WAS THIS?!?!?!?!?!?
Don't Let The Game Make U, Make Urself

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RH1NO wrote:this wasnt good
not even my part? my part was the last part.
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Lawgix wrote:WTF WAS THIS?!?!?!?!?!?
my song, duh! wow your really dumb.
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BigP wrote:
RH1NO wrote:this wasnt good
not even my part? my part was the last part.
LOOK IMA KEEP IT REAL.... first dude spittin (if you can call it that) sounded like a special kid wit a lisp,
the flow was off on the whole thing, well it wasnt even there, the hook was garbage, the lyrics were garbage and basic,

n other classics you may remember like this one " pass the bong over here after that throw me a beer"

along with other timeless hits like " if your a pimp put your cain up"

and who can forget this #1 hit " jump up high n start a moshpit after that take a hit" wtf?

for only 3 easy payments of $33.99 you can own monsters of flop

n P your verse was better than his yes but only cuz you dont have a lisp

hope you're kidding about this ... do you listen ta these tracks before you post them

i would recommend stopping... step up ya vocab n then go from there cuz right now ya on pre-k level
lyrically

no hate but ya want feedback there ya go

n try this a good little tool for ya....

http://dictionary.reference.com/
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RH1NO wrote:
BigP wrote:
RH1NO wrote:this wasnt good
not even my part? my part was the last part.
LOOK IMA KEEP IT REAL.... first dude spittin (if you can call it that) sounded like a special kid wit a lisp,
the flow was off on the whole thing, well it wasnt even there, the hook was garbage, the lyrics were garbage and basic,

n other classics you may remember like this one " pass the bong over here after that throw me a beer"

along with other timeless hits like " if your a pimp put your cain up"

and who can forget this #1 hit " jump up high n start a moshpit after that take a hit" wtf?

for only 3 easy payments of $33.99 you can own monsters of flop

n P your verse was better than his yes but only cuz you dont have a lisp

hope you're kidding about this ... do you listen ta these tracks before you post them

i would recommend stopping... step up ya vocab n then go from there cuz right now ya on pre-k level
lyrically

no hate but ya want feedback there ya go

n try this a good little tool for ya....

http://dictionary.reference.com/
whats a lisp?
-P
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Post by 16 Micz »

OMFG....lol u kill me..
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16 Micz wrote:OMFG....lol u kill me..
who killed you?
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RH1NO wrote:
LOOK IMA KEEP IT REAL.... first dude spittin (if you can call it that) sounded like a special kid wit a lisp,
the flow was off on the whole thing, well it wasnt even there, the hook was garbage, the lyrics were garbage and basic,

n other classics you may remember like this one " pass the bong over here after that throw me a beer"

along with other timeless hits like " if your a pimp put your cain up"

and who can forget this #1 hit " jump up high n start a moshpit after that take a hit" wtf?

for only 3 easy payments of $33.99 you can own monsters of flop

n P your verse was better than his yes but only cuz you dont have a lisp

hope you're kidding about this ... do you listen ta these tracks before you post them

i would recommend stopping... step up ya vocab n then go from there cuz right now ya on pre-k level
lyrically

no hate but ya want feedback there ya go

n try this a good little tool for ya....

http://dictionary.reference.com/
lmmfaoooooooo i want my money back!!! isn't there a guarentee?
BigP wrote: whats a lisp
ur dumber than i thought
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RH1NO wrote:<a href="http://photobucket.com" target="_blank"><img src="http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k85/r ... iffin2.jpg" border="0" alt="Photo Sharing and Video Hosting at Photobucket"></a>
stop disrespectin me.
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^^ earn respect
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im trying, but nobody is even giving me the least bit of respect.
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Post by RH1NO »

cuz you're droppin straight ass du-du on here dude...

practice in the scriptures n shit work on ya style n vocab n then start hittin 'em hard...

just a suggestion
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RH1NO wrote:cuz you're droppin straight ass du-du on here dude...

practice in the scriptures n shit work on ya style n vocab n then start hittin 'em hard...

just a suggestion
those lyrics right here wasent mine, they were "the kid's", only because he sent them to me and I used them.
-P
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