Anoya
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- AntiMaTTer
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Re: Anoya
wudup. Well we certainly love to give feedback but we love to receive feedback too. And welcome to the site, get up and active and make something happen.

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Re: Anoya
Yeah ... I see a new name .. and then look over to see who you left feed for ... 0 + 0 = 0
-- Fri May 18, 2012 2:08 am --
All that uhh uhh uhh yeah ... uhh ... sounds a bit porno at the beginning ... but then your voice kicks in ... it's really catchy and the recording brings out all the little nuances and scratches in it ... really catchy ... Good hook .. nice doubles on it ... This is has got a Nas New York flavor to it and it's workin' man ... honestly ... this sounds just fine to me ... The timing is solid ... The rhymescheme switches up ... Yeah ... Good shit!!!
Lookin' forward to your next one.
-- Fri May 18, 2012 2:08 am --
All that uhh uhh uhh yeah ... uhh ... sounds a bit porno at the beginning ... but then your voice kicks in ... it's really catchy and the recording brings out all the little nuances and scratches in it ... really catchy ... Good hook .. nice doubles on it ... This is has got a Nas New York flavor to it and it's workin' man ... honestly ... this sounds just fine to me ... The timing is solid ... The rhymescheme switches up ... Yeah ... Good shit!!!
Lookin' forward to your next one.
- Phasewon
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Re: Anoya
Dope beat, good mixing, the solid delivery helps to drown out the very simple lyrics, good hook, on a constructive tip I'd say step up the rhyming content a bit, but overall a solid track.
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- Livenlearn
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Re: Anoya
I like the quality, def. helps me focus on the lyrics more...The lyrics in the second verse was very real, I liked that you brought the topic to your personal circumstance, the emotion is clear in the music and helps carry the song along...Def. can see me vibing to this....The chorus isn't bad either, real nice structure, quality stuff man
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- PeyotePearl
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- NeverOddOrEven
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Re: Anoya
You sound like you're from Boston, not Sweden. But anyway, good track. You have excellent mic presence and delivery. If you elevated your rhyme schemes, all you would need is promotion to climb up.
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