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Time to release the beast who makes you reach for heat only to bleed for weeks
Where we're seen so deep and believed to sleep on the fucking street's concrete
Starving in life, so I eat the weak like working two jobs full time, think you spit cool rhymes?
This soldier has cold shoulders that're froze over, words hit like a mac's blast, I'm down to pull mine
Your gimmicks might fool minds, but they belong to a fool's mind, while I'm proving this circuit's a circus
You fucks show more ass than corner whores, but even worse than them, you worthlessly work it
My words from a furnace, quick to burn without notice and the fame's earned when I word it
Don't have to discern that it's perfect, but in turn if you search it, you'd constantly return to my verses
Putting rappers firmly in hearses, solitary jail cell won't contain me when I put them six feet deep
I piss on geeks, shit on scholars then fucking piss off farmers when they see me rip these beets
I'm a goddamn fiend for beef, y'all better bring the lube mate, on these nuts like you're eating tube steak
Don't step to a true great who's schooled ranks back when you were still in your drool stage
And in diapers that carried your stool's weight, I'm the fucking power source who's skill towers yours
Quick to diss a bitch til they shit a brick begging to kiss my dick, when I bust I put kids on my shower floor!!!
i liked this,, been a while since i've seen ya arroud. b
this was a str8 piece for sure solid multis and really engaged the reader.
nice to see you still dropping fire man
My words from a furnace, quick to burn without notice and the fame's earned when I word it
Don't have to discern that it's perfect, but in turn if you search it, you'd constantly return to my verse
this was pretty nice especially for doing it on your phone
I tried that and always feel like my bars are too long
turns out they aren't otherwise you came with some sick multi's
a nice little flow that was easy to keep up with and some nice usage of meta's
a nice little warm up bro...keep writing
yo yo
"This soldier has cold shoulders that're froze over"
DAAAAMN SON!!!!
"Don't have to discern that it's perfect, but in turn if you search it, you'd constantly return to my verses
"
WHAT!?!?
Yo straight up heat on this dawg, if you put this shit on a track it would flow smooth as fuuuuck.
Good shit homie
all of this was dope as hell bro... good way to return and warm up haha... think my fav lines where and i quote...
Kuhlerblynd wrote:
This soldier has cold shoulders that're froze over, words hit like a mac's blast, I'm down to pull mine
Your gimmicks might fool minds, but they belong to a fool's mind, while I'm proving this circuit's a circus
You fucks show more ass than corner whores, but even worse than them, you worthlessly work it
My words from a furnace, quick to burn without notice and the fame's earned when I word it
Don't step to a true great who's schooled ranks back when you were still in your drool stage
And in diapers that carried your stool's weight, I'm the fucking power source who's skill towers yours
Quick to diss a bitch til they shit a brick begging to kiss my dick, when I bust I put kids on my shower floor!!!
again bro... ill.... can't wait till i can hear some damn audios from u!!!
that was cool i liked that it had cadence it wasnt complex but it felt right and a lot of time simple is good this was done in good taste now if you could do this same verse but only embed some deeper message and you will be on to something
"I'm a goddamn fiend for beef, y'all better bring the lube mate, on these nuts like you're eating tube steak
Don't step to a true great who's schooled ranks back when you were still in your drool stage
And in diapers that carried your stool's weight, I'm the fucking power source who's skill towers yours
Quick to diss a bitch til they shit a brick begging to kiss my dick, when I bust I put kids on my shower floor!!!"
First piece I have read from you and it is extremely solid.
Reminds me a bit of Royce Da 5'9. Great rhymes and flow.
