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Seanny T
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The W Freestyle

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heres the W Freestyle, official promo song for my mixtape. enjoy.
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for a freestyle this wasn't too bad... you said ur Irish... thats whats up man... your accent isn't that thick which is nice... most of the time the accents get in the way of lyrical ability... UK rappers sometimes have to put their accents on the side and push for a (as dumb and ignorant as this sounds) the "mainstream American sound"... meaning you sound American on the mic but your from a different country lol... but i like you man i think u have potential just hit up the Center Of Elevation and listen to the old heads that do audio on here all the time... u will get some pointers for sure...
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I was born in Canada but my parents r Irish so that makes my blood and heritage Irish and Scottish too actually. That's y I have no accept lol although I can sort of imitate it quite well. I'll check out the center of elevation too. And yea it was a very good freestyle for me usually it's very hard for me but every now and then I can make a good one :) I hVe another on my mixtape that's way longer and I just beast tue fuck outta it. Although I do rush lines at points in it, which I know u hate lol but it's still pree boss. I'm happy with it anyway. Ill get better tho so hopefully I can become a pro at freestyles

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its not really being a "pro at freestyles" u have to be concerned about elevating... its elevating as an emcee... when you are doing a track... freestyling is just a sport honestly... not every MC freestyles... if they do most of its pre wrote... some do some don't... i don't really freestyle... but if i were u... what i'd focus on is crafting your flow when you're doing a track... for an album or in this case a mixtape...
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Re: The W Freestyle

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some of that was stuff i had written before that i incorporated into the freestyle, i think like 2 of the verses, but ya i know im more concerned about elevating my skill than just freestylin, altho i love freestyling i find its a good way to think quickly, and some of my best rhymes have come from it. like: 'drinkin and drivin, swervin and slidin, head into tha oncomin traffic, and still survivin' for example, that was off the top of my head. ayo check out more songs by me, im uploadin a couple more today. thx for all the feedback to!
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