PBL Week One: IlloKWent -VS- Dynamiq (Closed IlloKWent KO)

[Speakers]

Week One
2 Bars
Due By: Sunday December 11th, 2011
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Checkins are not required but encouraged

Goodluck

[ILLoKWENT]

check ,and 2 bars submitted ... good luck dynamiq

[Dynamiq]

check

[Speakers]

Waiting for Dynamiq

[ILLoKWENT]

Wtf.....for a paltry two bars and he aint done yet in four days....i can shit that out after a meal..lmao

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[Speakers]

Dynamiq

just saw this and got my pm. sorry for the hold up im posting this tonight.

Look i don't have time for Riddlin',on how i'd kick a multi dope as him, when their shit that's awfully wrong with em

So Those..

kids with large heat roam with him? nah! he aint ever KEEP STILL,but i bet one punch'll leave ILL at ease like he had DIFFICULTY FOCUSING


Your amountin' To Nothing, i can tell from his bare face that he felt chills
or gonna need help filled,cause ya'll can Plead for his "Deer Life" But in the end your still "See Ill Killed"



Expos: Bar 1: Ritalin/Riddling - Addies/At Ease/Adderall - Keep Still/Keep Steel..adderall helps you keep still and focus.

Bar 2: Bare Face/Bear Face,Deer Life/Dear Life - See Ill Killed/See Elk Killed

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IlloKWENT

-http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/give- ... 24218.html

^^^^^^^^^^^funniest shit ever....i would add more but everyone else summed it up...cryin lil bitch..

-in kitchen nightmares, gordan ramsey goes to help fancy restaurants that serve crappy food and losing money

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peeped your battles, the SCRIPTS FORCED,LIKE SEX JOBS,which is why THIS DORK CANT GET PROPS,
IN SHORT, YOUR BEST, GONE, cause the only time 'nam's ever recognized', when debating WHICH WARS U.S. LOST/vietnam


in THIS SPORT MY TEXT ROCKS,while noone wants to 'see this pussy drop' like SKYDIVIN WIT PETS, and if ya TRY FIGHTING WIT VETS,
we wont need to watch 'kitchen nightmares' to FIND DYNE IN A MESS/fine dinin' a mess


p.s. you damn lucky the limit is two bars...son..lol

[Quix]

Ok..I was a little dissapointed with Dy's punches. i thought he would have came harder. Some oh his multis didn't add up either. Illok did his thing had some witty wordplay and concepts. I think the fine Dyn-a-mess bar was the best in the entire battle. So MVGT ILLOKWENT

[Omnie]

I lost the flow in Dynamiq's first bar and the second bar wasn't hard hitting IMO..."gonna need help filled"??? I don't get that...

Ill had the better bars here...multies and punches...personal bringing up the props thing, winner is obvious IMO...

Seen much better from D...

+1 Ill

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[ReduX]

wasnt really feeling either of these, both flows felt awkward.
Dynamiqs first line took me a while to figure out where the rhyme was
I liked how Ill's bar 1 closer and 2 opener followed topic and his lasy bar was good too.

mvgt Ill

[Quix]

ILLOK wins 3-0

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