PBL Week One: JDR -VS- Redux (CLOSED JDR - KO)

[Speakers]

Week One
2 Bars
Due By: Sunday December 11th, 2011
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Checkins are not required but encouraged

Goodluck

[JDR]

Checkidy Check

[ReduX]

check

[Speakers]

REDUX

Yo your pic reminds me of little red riding hood, well im the big bad wolf/
N tell that little pig girl of yours she need make up from nout to hoof.

I should rip you in half, you besmirch the mans name callin yaself JDR/
Son you so cheap and watered down you should change ya name to PBR.

*In his pic he's got a red hoody (red riding hood and three little pig reference)
**JackDaRipper - there's only one jack the ripper and this guy is not him.
***PBR-Pabst Blue Ribbon a very cheap and watery beer

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JDR

he done SHOWED ME his FLOWS WHACK, ya NO JACK, and this bitch is PHONEY like SHOW ACTS
and even if these VOTES BE from SLOW KATS, the only people thats In For Red is prolly from SONY or KODAK

so POST THESE EXPOSED RAPS thats HOED FAST and watch ya face SPREAD like TOOTH PASTE
Ya DEAD and DUDES PLAYED, cos you'd thought this was a Major League Contest the way RED - BLUE JAY

[CBK]

i dunno how were voting on this but mvgt jack, simple , humour relevance multi's flow all to jack.

and i thought we werent allowed expo's ???

[ILLoKWENT]

Huh? I thought just no pics allowed..the rules didnt say exactly no expos.
Mvgt jdr

Just clearer concepts and flips imo...
Redux your lines steerd toward personal attacks but they werent flippd too strong..even the tell yer girl to put on makeup was kinda basic ... The next line was the same with the concept being watered down flow, flippin wit pbr was aig ht but still jabbish....

Jdr, your two bars werent too strong either, the f ir st one im assuming ur werdplay was infrared, or wit pictures sony and kodak are tryin to eliminate red eye... So its kinda vague..
Next line with major league concept was decent , although it could be construed as a self diss ..u saying red gave u a blowjob, or he blew you ? No homo..lol..

Anyway, because of that it was actually alot closer ....

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[Enlightend]

Vote... JDR... more complex rhyme scheme, his punches finished.... redux ur punches didnt hit very hard at all, concepts were ok just no umph put in them ...