not named (unfinished)

[Meika]

just thought i'd let y'all peep lol

Sometimes i sit back and think lifes harder then it seems,,
all we do is chase our dreams,,
and most of us don't acheive,,
i just can't believe,,
but fuck life it's just a bad routine,,
it gets to the point were i don't wana breathe,,
i just wana take a gun to my head and leave,,
but if i told you i was guna do it would you stop mee ?,,

NO!, because people love to take advantage and be fake//
fuck ending my life it'l be yours i take/

see i only care for a few people,,
i wonder if i'm gods angel or satins equal,,
maybe his prequal,,

psyco crazy bitch yes i know this/
come up from behind and end your life without notice/
now focus/

i may seem like a normal person walking down the street,,
nahh i'm the type a chick you don't want your kids to meet

[MonuMental]

I like it Big Meik. Stop being such a stranger and come around and put a little more work in. We need more female emcees around here.

[Kau the Lion]

Rhymes were simple but it flowed well and that's really more important than the multies. Not bad otherwise. I think this is a topic we can all relate to at some time.

[FatalX]

you've come a long way since the last time I saw anything from you mieka your by the time your my age your gonna be one of the sickest female emcees outthere keep it up

[JDR]

simple rhymes but it packed emotion and flowed nice. Pretty good young'n

[KING RUM12]

Yooo..I love real shit and anger thas like my WHOOOLE LIFE...i like this read... even tho it still was basic wording and rhymes Ican tell u weren't going for that...the focus was your self...which i believe to be a big part of exquist writing...Nice interested and want to read more..

by the time your my age your gonna be one of the sickest female emcees outthere keep it up

^Agreed^

[AntiMaTTer]

I like it Big Meik. Stop being such a stranger and come around and put a little more work in. We need more female emcees around here.

yo mental dont be tryin holla at my meika
lmao

Anyway, meika you know how i felt bout this piece, shits good. Im actually surprised at how well you have your rhyme scheme down and the fact you also dont just type random rhymes but encompass a story behind your rhymes which is even more difficult, at such a young age you def on the right track to go.

[COMPUTERCHIPS]

Yo this was some grimey shit..lettin them know whats good..
I felt anger in this piece..putting your foot down on them.
thanks for the drop